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Yes I am not married but I have seen how bad a polygamous home can be and of all people you had to bring Mormons to this debate. Anyways I have personally seen how bad a polygamous home can be.
Author if I may make a suggestion. Instead of him paying ascendants in dollars, it may be better to pay in gold, precious gems and precious metals. You can try in the later chapters for mercenaries asking payments in these forms. First this is a supernatural world, so dollars may not be needed except if they want to do transactions in the human world.
Then Mursiala, Saka, Mbappe, so many others.
No really he is stupid. He is a banker and he cannot even prepare properly for this trip. By the way you wrote this story, it seems mediocre to me. This is just a basis for face slapping but in reality he would have gotten a bad review and would have been kicked out of the sect. Please try to be reasonable in writing your stories because I am not going to waste golden tickets or FP's with a sub par story.
What in the name of Drake?