The effect I aim to evoke in readers with this chapter, and throughout the narrative ahead, is profound. It's about crafting an emotional resonance that lingers, drawing them deeper into the story's world. With each turn of phrase and plot twist, my intention is to provoke thought, stir the imagination, and ultimately leave a lasting impact.

Another fantastic chapter! Keep up the amazing work!

This part had me laughing so hard! Great chapter, keep up the fantastic work! [img=More pls]

The first chapter is beautifully written, capturing the essence and excitement of driving in a unique way. I eagerly anticipate updates for the upcoming chapters. [img=update]

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Amazing first chapter really love it [img=More pls]

Chapter 7 of this novel was a riveting read, detailing Lu Xuan's dedicated efforts in cultivation and significant progress in his martial arts skills. In a short span of time, he reached the body refining third level peak and improved his fist strength. The reunion with his friend Yao Lei in Lin City added a heartwarming touch to the story as they discussed their plans to enhance their strength with dan medicines. The chapter was filled with excitement and hints of challenges to come, making it a captivating read that leaves readers eager for the next installment.[img=update]

This second chapter with Lu Xuan's transformation is truly remarkable. The information unfolds seamlessly, keeping me engaged. Exceptional storytelling! [img=More pls]

The initial chapter sets an impressive tone for Lu Xuan's story – an exciting beginning that leaves anticipation for what's to come. Great work!

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You've completed the first 6 chapters, and it's been an awesome start. Keep up the excellent work!

Just on this part but this doesn’t seem like the best move for Pran to make excited to see what’s next but also scared of the dangers he will face.

The mana fever seems like a huge weakness if anyone has a grudge against you just wait till you are in a mana fever and they got you unless you become immune while in the mana fever state but so far really enjoying the story keep up the great work mate

Amazing chapter really love the player system reminds me of solo leveling

Just got done with this chapter and started reading it today thoroughly enjoyed this chapter for a newcomer to writing you're doing a great job keep up the amazing work can’t wait to see where pran goes moving forward.

Thank you so much I have so many big things planned for this story can’t wait for you to read it!

Thank you I’m glad you enjoy it