Love the story and how well it’s developing .

Hand him my way if you go back to the tower!!! I’ll take care of him 😉🤭

Why??? She should of slap his face so hard! Omg!!

Does this chapter seems to be unfinished?

Thank you for your hard work! We really appreciate any updates you can give! Love this story!!!

The story line flow from one scene to the next is choppy. You can guess what the writer is trying to say but it’s better if it flow naturally. Also, what mother would leave their 5 year old children at home by themselves? It not like she doesn’t have the money to pay for it. C’mon

She has a man that loves her unconditionally; she should learn to cherish and appreciate what she has!

See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola

Happy birthday 🎉 🎂🍭!!! I love read your novel!!! Hope you have a great day!!!

So Kyle is the traitor!!!🫣🫣🫣

The ending could be better !!! It look like it just cut off. Is there apart two to this story??? That would be even better !!! It seems like it was building up to something then just cut off

Getting interesting !!!

See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola

Thank you for the updates !!! So many twist and turns to the story that it keeps you wanting to read more. I can’t wait for the Chapters!

When did she meet his parents ?

Yes I’m to see what happens between Mars,Em, and Cruella

Why is She sooooo weak sauce!!! For a person who likes reading books when she still lives with her father; and ends up spending most of our time in the library, shouldn’t she be reading some books that will strengthen her knowledge???

When I try that it’s says vote with power Stones

How do you use the Golden ticket