Yukisen

Regardless of the NTR, the story is pretty trash. No direction.

........................................it's dogshit.

.................................................................................................................................................its wack.......

Action, nice scenes, good amount of detail. The story hardly gets boring at times. It's great.

Exciting story! we just need more chapters!

The holy grail of stories. It's worth a read and you probably won't stop!

NTR warning stay away. Even if it just semi-NTR to some people, it's still NTR at the end of the day. Author won't be changing it. Let's all help by giving it a fail speed run lmao. Go read something else more worth your time and energy.

You know what's wrong with it....................................... .........................................................just so much.

beginning chapters filled with drama and nonsense. mostly the mc is a beta, and I even forgot at times that he was reincarnated with his age being older. The story is whatever with uneeded drama

I barely saw this little rat comment lol, it was poorly written dumbass, in regards to the emotional writing of the feeling of death, he almost died. It was a poorly written chapter in this aspect, get outta here lmao