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Ok I'm not gonna talk about hasirama But let's talk about Mito As we know mito gets married to hashi and hashi and madara established konoha and we see the uzumakis leave or konoha or something and create ushigakure. So you are saying that since mito is still alive she when ushigakure gets attacked she should go save them. So let me tell you why I think she didnt go 1) Cause She a member or villager of konoha village and she cant just bust in to the other villages business 2)Just like you said she is the strongest jinchuruki at that time and cause of something she is dying so we could think cause of this she had some res train to go help them 3)Now think about the first hokage's wife mito when to help people of anothr village if she did this then she would also drag konoha into this war So thats why I think they didnt help (I still have allot to say but I'm really bored to write all this)
Please get a editer or edit it better cause im getting headache cause the paragraphs you leave space are too big and all I got a say you will drop this 100% this story is too cliched and I have seen a lot of stories like this that get dropped
Ok first I think Its a stupid theory that when he get the dragon mark he has to have two lovers cause of it Second : You did great of showing the chemistry between mc and Erza in the early chapters by showing how their feelings grew or something like that(and again when he suddenly said to erza that cause he got a mark he has to have two lovers is unnecessary) Thrid : Its just my personal preference of just having one woman cause of the way you developed the story before he got the dragon mark or whatever (Sorry If my information was incorrect cause I didnt read it again after you rewrited it)