Fastnick14

they be dragging things in the novel unnecessarily

in chap 400 now and he's still at early purple mansion... is he ever gonna reach Golden core before chap 1k? I'm already tired of the slow pace

Nothing wrong with the novel but it so far( 30 chapters), It has nothing to do with the so called lightening creation. Been feeling like a slice of life novel.

chapters ago he said he'll level up... they br dragging things too much in this novel

story was going fine till it felt like everything got stuck... 70+ chapters and only a week or so has passed in the novel. They be dragging things unnecessarily. MC levels up fast already, the pace of the novel should keep up with the MC

too much bs is being said... he's trying too hard to fabricate his organization

Eveeything was fine until the novel got ruined when they started splitting the chapters for no good reason.

lovely book but the progression is too slow. Over 70 chapters in and barely half a month has passed in the novel. You don't have to give details to every single thing he does everyday.

so far i LOVE this novel but after hundreds of chapters, the separation of one chapter in two/three separate chapters too much. At chapter one thousand, the actual chapter is just in the 400s, which is crazy because you'd have to spend money to read those extra chapters that were separated

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