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John_Doe_96671mthReplied to FelcoxNo, he should ask his father-in-law… 😈
'Maybe I can get one of the Crimson Crane members to add their blood to it as well. I can already imagine what a monster will be created out of this.'- John_Doe_96672mthCommented
I’m starting to like this character.
"Heeeeey!!" Incensed at the way he called her, she shouted with her mouth full of popcorn. - John_Doe_96672mthReplied to Jagoda_Anusiewicz
Legos aren’t even that bad. Yeah sure it’s uncomfortable, but let me know when you accidentally step in a metal D4. That is true pain.
Hell, just one paper scratch on a finger or hitting the smallest toe into a table, and the majority fall to the ground wailing like their lives were over. - John_Doe_96673mthReplied to AV_Sweed32
Maybe James punched him in the mouth and so he bound a mimic to his jaw as a magical symbiotic relationship, to replace his missing teeth. And then he became a dentist when he realized the value of having teeth.
John just leaned against the dungeon wall, while Jekyll was flossing his teeth. It seemed that he had eaten a lot of monsters along the way and the dentist felt that this was a good opportunity to do some maintenance. - John_Doe_96673mthCommented
The two different types of foreshadowing are getting to be a bit excessive…
The shepherd enjoyed this moment of happiness, unaware that he would be caught inside the storm that was brewing inside the Royal Academy. - John_Doe_96673mthCommented
Author stole my favorite insult…
"Curse you human boy!" Psoglav shouted in anger. "I'll kill you and feast on your flesh! I'll drink your blood and make your skull my personal wine cup!" - John_Doe_96673mthReplied to Slushy_Apollo
I am unsure who that is, but this MC definitely has more plot armor then Han Xiao, the legend himself.
But just as Howard was about to make his move, he noticed a space rift emerging behind Sterling! - John_Doe_96673mthReplied to Nobody_0wens
Order of magnitude increase in power reduction in mana cost and it obtains sentience and the capability for independent thought. 🤔 probably not but one can hope. 🤣
[Ding! 1 skill point has been consumed. Dragonfire spell has successfully upgraded to level 2. Please check the details yourself!] - John_Doe_96674mthCommented
Interesting I’ve never experienced that bond…
As they held each other, their embrace spoke of the unbreakable bond that family shares, a bond that transcends distance and time. They knew that, in the embrace of their loved ones, they had found a sanctuary, a place where they could find solace and support no matter what challenges they faced. - John_Doe_96674mthReplied to DaoistukjfTM
Thank you for this glorious visualization.
Weirdly enough, the image of a water ball in his head appeared quite easily. Also, weirdly enough, Rain felt his mana being used. When he felt that, something fell on his table and drenched his notebook. - John_Doe_96674mthCommented
This is the question probably every elder sibling ever has asked at least once.
"Where can I turn your volume down?" Rain asked. "Holy… your vocal chords are off the charts." - John_Doe_96675mthReplied to world_inside_books
Thank you for putting the only true red riding hood here.
"Time to save Little Red Riding Hood!" - John_Doe_96675mthCommented
Is this an American football or a European football? 🤔
While the stream of energy continued to burst out from Quinn's mouth, something else was happening. From his blood wings, small orbs looked to be dripping off. They were floating in the air just beneath. Droplets of blood from the wings were forming into something the same size as a football. - John_Doe_96675mthReplied to shadowfox9801
This is exactly what I was thinking when I read that.
Finally, there was a sharp smile on his face, a smile that was so sharp in the corners of his mouth and so sinister, that it tilted his eyes. It was a smile that if anyone could see it, it would be seen in their nightmares for their entire lifetime. - John_Doe_96675mthReplied to Dizz
What is this from?
Finally, there was a sharp smile on his face, a smile that was so sharp in the corners of his mouth and so sinister, that it tilted his eyes. It was a smile that if anyone could see it, it would be seen in their nightmares for their entire lifetime. - John_Doe_96675mthReplied to TheSixKid
Wasn’t Quinn there battling the monsters when zero opened the portal to the red dimension? Or was zero somewhere else for that fight? Also I think zero had the marking on his forehead, so if Quinn saw his face through a monitor, he could have still seen the marking and recognized is as the same thing as Laxmus, who readily and loudly proclaimed himself a follower of immortuui during the battle before Quinn became the vampire king.
The more Quinn thought about it, there were other times where Quinn had seen the marking, or learned about it. Zero, the black sword, Laxmus, and now it was possible that Magnus was linked to it as well. - John_Doe_96675mthReplied to TheSixKid
You should really find a few other stories to read, that way you can let a few chapters build up and suffer a bit less from the cliffhangers. At least that’s what I’ve been doing, maybe that doesn’t work for everyone. Anyway I know this comment is probably rather late, but it would be a shame if you really did drop this story when it seems to be wrapping up. Your comments in the story always made the story that much better.
"This is good. Now I can fight without any distractions." - John_Doe_96675mthReplied to EvieEternal
Than you for this. I’m a bit late(to the story in general) but I appreciate another of the seemingly extremely few who know the true and solemn meaning of that phrase.
He enjoyed his time at Melinda's, even if he couldn't stay for long. It was inconvenient for him to travel to Rittersberg, so talking with one more Larkinson besides Melkor reminded him he was a part of the Larkinsons as well. Blood was thicker than water, and Ves had a feeling he needed to count on them sooner or later. - John_Doe_96676mthReplied to Matt_Garrood
This was funnier then it should have been. 🤣
A mech pilot was there to pilot his mech, not the other way around. - John_Doe_96676mthReplied to Sage_OfOld
I appreciate that saying. Also yeah, proofreading isn’t a thing in this book, and the grammar police constantly marking paragraphs makes it hard to enjoy the story. I like reading the funny comments other readers put, but these constant corrections on easily overlooked (non)issues in the text are really obnoxious and immersion breaking. Thank you for trying to help tell them off. I appreciate the effort.
One major difference between the galactic heartland and the galactic rim was that railguns supplanted the role of ballistic rifles entirely. Though they lacked in versatility, they more than made up for it in sheer power. The ability to send out a huge kinetic impact was extremely useful in breaking apart the enemy's trutleshells.