Sword_Seigneur
I’m sorry I was late. I didn’t wanna come.
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Sword_Seigneur7mthCommentedBig run-on sentence with random commas. Does the grammar improve?
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The clogs in his head? I think it’s cogs
Reaching the front gates, Silas stared at the guard for a moment. Syra was about to take out a token of some sort to show the guard, but the moment he looked at Silas, the clogs in his head began to turn, causing him to bow slightly before clearing the path for Silas, his sister, to enter. - Sword_Seigneur1yrReplied to famus_tem
It’s made of 4 1x1x1 cubes. By definition a cube is in cubed units.
His dimensional storage had increased to 2 square meters after the expansion was complete. - Sword_Seigneur1yrCommented
Slight grammar error. It would be “none knows” not “none know” since none is singular and means not one.
"Some of you may have noticed that the rank plates don't indicate your exact level. In simple words, each rank has levels, and to promote from one rank to another, like, from Apprentice Wizard to Arch Wizard, there are five levels in each rank. And for the ranks beyond Arch Wizard, every rank has ten levels. Except for the Supreme Wizard, since none know what lies beyond that. - Sword_Seigneur1yrReplied to predatorninja2
2 sexes* not genders
There were a significant number of people of all genders. But their clothes could be called uniforms as most of them were similar. The guards had shining silver armour with swords, hammers or lances. The rest of the people wore white, light grey or brown gowns. Some of them had some short, shoulder-length capes around their necks and a golden plate on their chest, tying the red cape. - Sword_Seigneur1yrCommented
So he can smell emotions?
Sylvester, simultaneously, sensed a familiar smell, one that he smelled the time that Chief Deserte tried to kill him—So bitter… His nose, tongue, and even his breathing felt bitter. - Sword_Seigneur1yrCommented
You can’t say they are named for no particular reason and then immediately provide a reason…
''Yes. They are named that way for no particular reason. All members of high-level organizations are referred to as shadows. The reason they are called shadows is that they can appear unexpectedly in unexpected places, just like before,'' Belicia explained. - Sword_Seigneur1yrCommented
Unless his dimensional storage is a 2d spade I’m pretty sure it would be 2 cubed meters.
His dimensional storage had increased to 2 square meters after the expansion was complete. - Sword_Seigneur1yrCommented
The comma goes between chubby and sly not between sly and looking.
Han Cai's father was a chubby sly, looking businessman. Who would believe such a fat, sly looking man would be so hard-working. Han Cai was sure even in his earlier life, when he was not 10 years old, he couldn't be as hard-working and committed as his father. - Sword_Seigneur1yrReplied to Sword_Seigneur
Meant sly* not shy
Han Cai's father was a chubby sly, looking businessman. Who would believe such a fat, sly looking man would be so hard-working. Han Cai was sure even in his earlier life, when he was not 10 years old, he couldn't be as hard-working and committed as his father. - Sword_Seigneur1yrCommented
They SUDDENly shivered all of a SUDDEN. C’mon man. That’s redundant
When the young barbarians saw the smile on Lu Chen's face, they suddenly shivered all of a sudden. - Sword_Seigneur1yrCommented
Bro, pick a tense! I cant stand the horrible grammar. peaCe
Despite his strangeness, there are many couples who attempted to forge a bond with him. Believe it or not, he was once the child that is most sought after by the couples who looking to adopt. - Sword_Seigneur1yrCommented
In a world with limited technology, how would the people be aware of 20/20 vision and what are the chances they use the same scale to measure it?
"…Hindsight is 20/20 they say." Rui retorted playfully. - Sword_Seigneur1yrCommentedCh 121 Chapter 121: Weakness
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Didn’t the system say that breaking through in the Spirit World is much harder and more dangerous?
"Good thing I didn't eat the Fruit of Cultivation right away. It would be bad if I summon my tribulation lightning within the city. I think I have to breakthrough inside the Spirit World to prevent unnecessary troubles." When a peak stage Nascent God Realm expert attempts to break through, they would summon much fiercer tribulation lightning. Every increase in major realm means that they would encounter stronger tribulation lightning, but after overcoming this trial, they would become peak experts! - Sword_Seigneur1yrCommented
The group that made the Oracles could have programmed it to have a bias, so they are actually influencing every decision made by people with the bracelet.
Xi was ceaselessly invoking his insufficient authority to deny his right to the truth. She was obviously hiding an ominous secret that couldn't be revealed at any cost. To understand what was the purpose of these Oracle bracelets, he had to think outside of the box. What was the direct effect of such a gift in the long run? For one person, it was a blessing, but at the planet scale, the implications were totally diffe— - Sword_Seigneur1yrCommented
Note to the author: Just a reminder to keep tenses consistent.
Marcus wakes up once again a part of him hoping his experience on Mirrion had all been a dream and that he was still in his hotel room ready to continue his vacation. - Sword_Seigneur1yrCommented
I’m gonna shock the world -Deji
This paragraph has been deleted. - Sword_Seigneur2yrReplied to Reader_From3125NCh 3 Undercurrents