... i really don't think i'll be able to write a good review... or a non critical one, i can try tomorrow, but be warned, it will most likely be extremely long. if it will really help you get more recognition, that you so rightly deserve, i'd be glad to help out. 👍 anyway goodnight. 🤗

if the dungeon is something that you really want in the title and her titular title, then i suggest these. dungeon Sovereign, dungeon Madame, dungeon keeper, dungeon monarch, dungeon Matriarch. if ya feel ya dunna need dungeon in the title these are my suggestions, but want her titular title. Core Queen, solitude Monarch, forgotten princess, A princess seeking respite, if ya just want a a title that suits her situation, then here's my suggestions. hope sprouts from the depths, mending a heart, severance, cultivating warmth, nourish the broken. and lastly here is some japanese length title suggestions. 🤦‍♂️ The girl trapped by a core, seeking warmth in the light.🤦‍♂️ raised by a dungeon, becoming unrivaled in might.🤦‍♂️ beating a dungeon to return home is not normal.🤦‍♂️ anyway hope any of these help with the naming, the japanese ones where jokes that i hope ya got a laugh out of. 😁👍🤗

oh no... please say it ain't so. 😂🤣😂

should've aimed lower. 😈

and these people just so happen to be of the female persuasion. 😋😂😭

... i feel like this is a cop out. 😂🤣😂

why is it slowly turning into a spanish novel... 😵🤔😋

i really needa ask... just what is this implying. 😂🤣😂 if you take it at face value they will be rivels... if you think about it another way... we know who will be dominate in their relationship and i sense Yandere Alert. 😱😭😱

... feet ? what, oh well guess we will find out "next time on how to tame your friend" 😂🤣😂

mother like daughter, their both bottoms. 😁😂😁😂😁

reading the Authors note and seeing your open to constructive criticism is a good thing, just keep at it and with time you'll improve. 😁👍😁

the spacing and breaking up paragraphs made this a great deal easier to read, good job. 👍👍👍

i take back what i said. 🤦‍♂️

sisters... right ? 🤔 i've seen worse. 😋

so both her parents are having affairs... or would it be better to say open relationship , if it was poly wouldn't care... but cheating disgusts me a lot. 😡 i could rant and rave about how i seriously hope Riya is only like her mom in her sexuality... 😕 however, i think i've been negative enough. 😱 i'm looking forward to seeing some actual sincerity from Riya to Lee, since right now it feels very fast, with a lack of foundation. ... hmm this seem overly negative, but i am enjoying the concept so far and hope to see many more chapters in the future. 👍😁

just found this here, dunna know if you will see it author-san, but i hope you will keep writing and not let pirating hurt you too much. 🤗 unfortunately it has become a huge issue on this site recently, so i hope you all the best on the other sites you named and i'll hopefully see you on them some time soon. 😁

so our mc is going to continue to consider herself male, inside a female body...🤔 while i hate the trope, at least you've given an interesting reason for it. 👍 that and Alice seems to really be looking forward to her future prospects in the looks department or rather "mountain" department. 😂🤣😂 just one thing... she has two moms ??? 🤔 sorry for the rant. 😁😂😭😱

uh did val not say this to her in a previous chapter, something about not everyone is lucky to be able to reset their youth. ??? 🤔 i'm 99% sure she did, because i thought 'when did they talk about it' since she knew about it. 😕

i liked the descriptions, just the tone of narrative changing and the perspective going from 1 to 3rd for the same character, just at different time of day was weird, if it was a flash back it would make more sense. ...wish their was a shorter way to explain exactly what i mean. 🤦‍♂️ in no way do i think what you did was bad, it's just the tone and narrative changing for the same character was kinda weird, it led me to the false assumption that we were seeing some menacing danger that imogen will be fighting in future. 🤔 maybe try this again but from another persons perspective, who ends up coming across the little ball of chaos, that is imogen. 🥴 hope this clears up what i mean... somehow i dunna think it will. 😋 anyway, looking forward to more, don't worry about trying something like this again, ya never know what will work till you try it. 👍😁👍

uh ya forgot a S. 😋👍