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be tough bro life always bout challenges anyway thanks for the chapter good read
good luck 👌 can't wait for the updates
nice plot twist there 😂
yo don't rush too much on the romance take it slow 👌 anyways tqs for the chap👍
Hope they keep the main ships
Story is pretty good but could use some improvements. I'm no expert just giving some suggestions from novels I've read don't know if it can be incorporated in your novel tho. - Try making some space when a dialogue happens between characters maybe one line for each character - Add some character dev for side character makes it more interesting ( i think) - Should not be too op else there no struggle rivalry like deku and kacchan