Well, guess I'll stop there then if you ever decide to make it harem then reply to this comment I'll pick it back

Well as long as you don't make it a catch them all fanfic I can't see the quality going down if you keep it a the 3 then it can be perfect, anyway as I said it's not the fact that you won't do harem that put me off I just want to know the pairing and if the pairing isn't NaHi well I won't be able to enjoy reading this, that's what I meant so can you confirm the pairing?

Yo, I've been reading this story from the beginning and well I expected a harem, the fact that you won't do one is your choice but I at least wanted to know the pairing? to know whether It's something I'll enjoy reading or not, because I can't see anything other than NaHi if it's not harem and I'll rather not

Man, I don't know what to say, you keep on butchering your fanfic with what you did with Nemuri and now Rumi they are completely OOC, I know that this a parody fanfic but man wtf? the backstory you give them don't even make sense? it doesn't even have a purpose or anything and it was the last straw personally, her character in the original is really complex and we have to pay attention to the underlying meaning behind it to understand her in depth and since she's one my favorite character well let's say I delved into it a lot and it's really interesting and you get to learn a lot from it, like the fact that she didn't have any relationship anyway it doesn't make sense and that's where I'll stop and drop

This is much more like her original character, her character in the original is really complex and we have to pay attention to the underlying meaning behind it to understand her in depth and since she's one my favorite character well let's say I delved into it a lot and it's really interesting and you get to learn a lot from it, like the fact that she didn't have any relationship or won't have one without signifiance

Well as long as you clarify it, her character in the original is really complex and we have to pay attention to the underlying meaning behind it to understand her in depth and since she's one my favorite character well let's say I delved into it a lot and it's really interesting and you get to learn a lot from it, like the fact that she didn't have any relationship or won't have one without signifiance

Let's also not forget that in past chapters you said that she never felt warmth and things like that from anybody other than her family and let's not forget that her character, personality, and history in the original make it obvious that she never had any relationship and that she won't have any without signifiance which means if it's not on the long term, this is based on her personality and character

Age doesn't mean anything for such things, All Might is a prime example of it and in MHA she's shown to be a battle crazed loner through and through and that's her entire character so that's enough to say that she didn't have any in the original but I'm talking about your fanfic there so would be nice to have a confirmation otherwise it's just weird and feel off

Man, I don't understand this sentence, this is her first relationship is that right? because you say 'long' why precise it? I mean he's her first right? (like for everything)?

What is the same for her? opening up to each other? Also this is her first relationship right? can we get a pov of her?

In the MHA world or before?

Thanks for explaining it

I can't understand you anymore unless you are talking about seduction and nothing further, you said that mc was her first and she was her first then there are bits like this part that make it weird/questionable

Did you fix any? because I can still see them?

I know you said there will be a lot of bullshit but at least it has to make sense right? You say she didn't date anyone and then say people she dated told her to not dress like that so which is it ? there are many inconsistencies like that so you should re read it and clear those things Also good to confirm that she is a virgin but why do you try to make it look like she's easy? I mean I know perverted girls that are still virgin and trust me they aren't easy but picky I think you should have her as perverted but with a certain self control (like she act perverted but doesn't do anything until she is sure that it's the right one) because you are completely destroying her character and your story was going well until all of this which make me wonder whether it's still worth it or not Hope it didn't came out offensive it's just that it's weird how you do things ** : One can be a great kisser without prior experience

Why? You have to know that she isn't like that in the manga / anime and she's a virgin it's actually only a persona and if you make her into something like you said many are going to drop and even more so depending on that twist of yours

Man you don't know how soothing it is to have you say this, It's great to know that she's MC's first and MC's is her first

It's hard to imagine her as you said after this chapter in a way without verbal confirmation from you it's hard, just would have been better if at least he wasn't a virgin and had small things at least, and why do I sense the drama

Yeah I get why he is one just hoped it would be confirmed for her too but that fact that you don't and let it remain unknown is at the same time reassuring but also irritating

I understand what you mean and the fact that you leave that stone unturned is understandable but it's hard to take it as 'reader's choice' sometime, obviously only talking about some of us since for others it works well, obviously her hymen was breaked through training or the surgery done on her and I'm not one to judge ones virginity on it since it can even break from running it's just that as you said now some people wait for their one and only partner and I find this beautiful, I just wanted them to be on the same ground you see it would have made the relationship so much better, the fact that we know that he's virgin but that it's 'unknown' for her kinda put off, don't know if you got what I mean, Hope it didn't come out as offensive because that wasn't the intention, It's just that clear answer would have been good