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You know, some things just happen lmao.
Nah it wasn't needed, let's say it just happened.
Alright, this is my second time writing a story. There might have been things you didn't like or did like, I would appreciate it if you were to leave a review behind (good or bad). Thank y'all for reading and for those that are wondering about my first story, that one is currently paused. Thanks for letting me waste your time.
Hhmm, maybe I should have gone for the bro. Maybe next time, this time ladyboy is the MC.
I'm still thinking about giving him real fighting powers, where he could be the deciding factor. If I were to give him any sort of power in the future it would be something small that needs a creative mind to be useful. I'm always open to suggestions.
My first instinct was to create a MC without a Divine Protection/Authority. Later on, I decided to think about a power that could at least neutralize Pandora's power. If the MC is going to have a power then it would be an original, It might have to do something with 'time' (Like Subaru's or Al's) or it might become a useful but not so powerful power.
I also publish on fanfiction/net and there I use bold characters, but because Webnovel doesn't allow that I just leave it be. Next time I will follow your advice and do a transition, to create more structure.
The MC is not going to be a person that gets carried all the time. He will get "carried" when it comes to fights sometimes, but not when it comes to creating the opportunity to strike. He will have his own weaknesses and strengths. If you want to read a strong MC, then I would recommend Forced Re:Start on fanfiction/net.
Yea, you can definitely argue that what he did here was stupid. He could have kept his mouth shut and left the Karsten Mansion (if they allowed it), but would he survive, maybe. He is scared like I would expect everyone to be and at this moment his safety takes priority. But the MC is going to downplay his "ability" because he understands the severity of the butterfly effect, this will be further discussed in the later chapters.