Author, at least Nicholas Cage has been recovering in the last few years with the low-cost films ... but the trailer for Bruce Willis' last film, let's not talk about it.
Ben didn't want to end up like Bruce Willis, washed up and doing low budget movies just for paychecks like an untalented Nicolas Cage...
Just for the development, like when they find out about the other women, it would be interesting to see the reaction and attitude of each one after that happened.
I have a tip for Ben, before he hits someone ... think about the possible results first.
And a question for the author, will we have a chapter that will present the POV of his girlfriends in the near future?
That prologue chapter still leaves me in doubt. Could it be that the system exists only in one world or does it exist in several multiverses and those guys, let's call it "hunters" for now, would be wandering the dimensions.