Cain26

I’m stealing this

Not ?

Yay, I feel that spears do not get enough love.

The one thought with mixed reviews.

Change the —— to a ,

This is not my final review, but I just have to give it 5 stars for making me laugh 3 times in chapter 1.

Why x2

Why

To the author I recommend that you read this novel from the beginning and fix or add details where it is needed. I understand that this was your first novel that you have written, but it is now at 200+ chapters and the first 80’s are a slugfest. It doesn't matter if chapter 200 is good, if the beginning is boring people not feeling investing their time in this story.