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The story starts off fine. The system and the way the MC’s powers work are interesting, and for a while, that carries the story. The MC makes some dumb decisions early on, but at least there’s noticeable improvement over time. However, around chapters 60–70, the writing quality takes a noticeable dive. The author starts padding chapters with excessive, repetitive detail, as if they don’t trust the reader to understand anything without it being explained five different ways. It’s not just descriptive—it’s bloated. I understand the mc is fast. That does not require four paragraphs spelling it out. I understand there’s a plan. That does not need to be repeated across five paragraphs with slightly different wording. At a certain point, it stops being clarification and starts feeling like filler. Some parts cross into outright ridiculous territory—like spending multiple paragraphs explaining what a decapitated person was planning to do, as if that has any relevance once they’re dead. Moments like that don’t add depth; they just waste the reader’s time. Honestly, it feels like the author ran out of meaningful content and resorted to stretching scenes with unnecessary exposition to bulk up chapter length. The result is slower pacing, weaker impact, and a reading experience that becomes increasingly frustrating.
I would bomb you
The book was discontinued because it is stealing a lot from a book series called tank Assassin
He could be like Hitler with only one
White stuff
I think he started with 100 mp
Hasn’t he heard of hidden missions
He’s probably going to go with assassin for speed