As a reader, it is important to me that the story has a plot twist. I am a silent reader but know I decided to give some review. I am reading this story for a couple of weeks I guess, and I can say that the story and the author is improving. At first, I can see some errorssuch as spellings, and sometimes the use of past and present tense, but as time goes on, I notice that the errors are reduced and the only problem is the update. The author's update is a bit long because maybe she is busy with school and her other novel. But all in all, I can say that the story is good and I feel like I can read more plot twists. keep it up!