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KiyoshiTsuki

KiyoshiTsuki

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I'm just a normal person who loves reading, but as I am a reader I also try to write chapter for my own books but, the only problem with that is that I don't know what my readers would like

2020-11-27 JoinedGlobal
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  • KiyoshiTsuki
    KiyoshiTsuki2 years ago
    Posted

    ok author ii m so lost in this story there literally no story plot like getting stronger, or trying to find a way home, to me this story seems half assed no offense the mc is too childish and yes I get the fact that he's a kid but like wtf, the kid went through battles and is still childish ash and to top it off you have pongo who serves no purpose and tbh with you as a author myself ik a kid with immortal parents who have destroyed galaxies wouldn't allow for their to get spoiled and the kid has also gone through battle this story is literally fucked

  • KiyoshiTsuki
    KiyoshiTsuki3 years ago
    Commented

    surprisingly, it's not too different from the other system novels but I'm enjoying it, Ashton has a lot of potential just as a viewer don't make him too op bc it will just get boring and predictable, but overall I like it soooo in conclusion keep up the work my fellow Arthur

  • KiyoshiTsuki
    KiyoshiTsuki3 years ago
    Replied to SlyShadow

    thanks, and if you have any suggestions just tell me I'm always open for them even if its criticism all feedback is welcome.

  • KiyoshiTsuki
    KiyoshiTsuki3 years ago
    Commented

    towards the end, he unlocks his mana sorry if u were confused

  • KiyoshiTsuki
    KiyoshiTsuki3 years ago
    Posted

    Hey guys shameless Author review trust me to give it a shot when I start uploading I promise it will be worth your time, also I hope this story ends up as good as lust knight you should go over there and read their book I don't want my main character as much of a women collector though. no offense to anyone though, to next peace

Re: Destiny

when romance, action, adventure, r18, yandere, and family betrayal are put together ___________________________________________________- synopsis 2: As the law of absurdity dictates, people are born different, may it be horns, facial features, BloodLines, or abilities. however, dí lún(Dylan) had the worst "luck" of them all; getting his trust broken by his friends/family, he tried moving on in life by moving out on his own but he was a kid(10-year-old) what could he know. kind of a spoiler later he makes a new friend unknown to him, won't tell you their gender/or personality ________________________________________________________- now what you expect me to do/ know I shall not know because this stuff is new to me the only reason I could have written this is that the stories/novels I read are not to my taste or are just too bland and I just wanted people with the same taste as me to have something they can enjoy now the character development will be slow I think because I'm new to this don't worry about the world-building I will try to make it decent, oh and I will try my absolute best to write well so you readers can understand it. nowhere are the credits first my inspiration goes out to Ru_ri they did a pretty good job on the "My family are yandere's" before it got rebooted and if you are reading this part my story will have some of the same elements, Sorry Ru_ri no offense but I took some of your ideas and added them to mine, one thing I Will was not good at writing light smut, aka fan service I also haven't written, or imagined written R-18 stuff but I swear on my word I will try. English is one of the four languages that I learned in school but I promise there will be errors in my writings sorry in advance. cover, not mine so *Credits* to the artist my upload schedule will be messed up because of collage

KiyoshiTsuki · Fantasy
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