Gelousin

The characterization, lore, and plot of this story fascinate me. However, some areas are too wordy, which somewhat detracts from the enjoyment of reading. Even so, I highly recommend this story.

The characterization, lore, and plot of this story fascinate me. However, some areas are too wordy, which somewhat detracts from the enjoyment of reading. Even so, I highly recommend this story.

This story is fun to read. The interactions between the characters are also interesting. However, perhaps what should be improved is the writing. Sometimes paragraphs end awkwardly. I also feel the variety of words is limited. But, it's still a good read.

Menurutku, ini masih masuk novel slice of life, tetapi dengan setting yang sangat tidak umum, yakni pesantren. Salut untuk penulis yang berani ambil tema seperti ini. Semangat terus!