Still reading, but would reccomend it so far. The pacing is good with quirky traits / personalities in the characters. Would make a good animated series or comic.
"Because I considered you a competition, but you were not even near that. I was thinking of stepping away if you truly became a man worthy of her love, and she loved you back. But now, even if she did, I wouldn't give up on her because I think she deserves better than a man confessing his love without committing to it."
Still giggling about this comment, 5 mins later :)
Raphael answered, "That's possible, but memories can be tricky, Lady Madeline. There is a possibility of lapse that can either bring it back or tamper it further."Â