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To clear up any confusion. All of Harry's friends bar Hermione abandoned him. This fanfiction is supposed to be a Good Dumbledore/Mentor Dumbledore fanfiction, so I tried have Harry interact with Albus as if they were old friends. Please forgive me if some things are a little confusing.
Okay, so for those who are curious. Someone pointed out to me the obvious flaws with my story. Sorry if I can’t reply to you directly, by the way, for some reason, your comment’s not on here, yet I see it in my notification. But, I have to admit this wasn’t my brightest idea, I don’t think. But to your question about whether or not he “eats” the souls of animals, that’s a big nope. Animals (except for Marge’s dogs) have never given him reason to kill them, but everybody else has. It’ll be difficult for Harry to have a redemption story on Remnant… if the story continues, that is. Yeah, I can’t see Yang or Blake accepting Harry if he confessed he had basically slaughtered his whole world in a fit of rage. At least, not in the beginning. But Harry’s got a few tricks up his sleeve that might win them over ;)
Yeah, sorry. I fixed it. I had to remember that A century is a hundred years.
Well, it IS possible for Daedric Princes to take on consorts. Vaermina had a Breton consort in The Elder Scrolls Online when you had to save the king of the Daggerfall Covenant, King Emeric from her. When you kill her consort, she sounds genuinely in grief about it. Plus Malacath had a son in the Elder Scrolls canon before Sheogorath tricked him kill him. Lamae Beolfag is Molag Bal's consort... though, more an unwilling consort than anything out of a genuine love (plus, let's not forget that Molag Bal married Vivec, and had unholy abomination spawns with him, according to the 36 Lessons of Vivec). There are probably other instances of Daedric Princes taking on mortal consorts, I just can't name them all. As to your concerns of adults leaving Dumbledore so easily. That's more of my own fault. There are characters that I like, and don't like. Remus, Tonks, Moody, Bones, Scrimgeour, Sirius, Narcissa, Bellatrix (whom I can see being under Voldemort's manipulations), I don't know much about Andromeda as I have yet to read the books (currently I'm halfway through the Sorcerer's Stone, and have yet to finish it). Those are examples of characters I like. Dumbledore (after putting much thought into it), the Weasleys (again, after putting enough thought into it... well, Fred and George are the best, so it's not complete Weasley bashing), Voldemort (obviously), the male Malfoys, Fudge, and Umbridge (shocker) are examples of people I DON'T like. Again, sorry if I made it too easy for certain adults to betray Dumbledore like that, but there WILL be those who remain faithful. I just wanted certain members of the OotP to have brains and think for themselves rather than blindly follow Dumbledore. Thanks for enjoying the story so far. It was a pain in the neck to think of something for this chapter, but I managed to get it out.
Well, some males she has an aversion to. Having been in the same house as Vernon and Dudley Dursley would most certainly put off any girl. And let’s not forget Ron Weasley’s abhorrent eating habits. But no, Cinder Isn’t completely turned off from males... it’s just that she hasn’t had any positive male influences in her life... of course, if you disclude Mehrunes Dagon that is.
Ah, a fellow RWBY fan! I had honestly thought about making this a triple crossover between Harry Potter/RWBY/The Elder Scrolls where female Harry IS in fact Cinder Fall since I've only seen one fanfiction where fem Harry is Cinder, and even then, it wasn't long enough for my tastes.
Sorry for not replying sooner. To answer your question. A Shadow Phoenix is as its name suggests. Instead of being a Phoenix that are creatures of Light, they are creatures of Darkness, and instead of utilizing fire magic, they utilize shadow magic.
I might be able to update it soon, but today, I had another fanfiction idea for a Harry Potter/Elder Scrolls crossover, so it might not be today. I had just learned that ESO is coming out with another DLC called "Gates of Oblivion", and because I'm a fan of both Harry Potter, and The Elder Scrolls, it kinda inspired a new idea. Like I said, I can update the next chapter for this as soon as possible, but I'd kinda like to get started on this new idea, if that's alright.
As for Snape. I think he's smart enough to realize that neither Dumbledore nor Voldemort are going to live and at the end of the day, Xaria is the one standing over BOTH their corpses. I think I'll have Snape act as Xaria's agent within both the Order of the Phoenix AND the Death Eaters.
All very good questions. While Xaria can simply self-study in the Dark Arts of magic, she chose to study at Hogwarts to be as close to Dumbledore as possible, biding her time before she strikes. School is trivial to her in the grand scheme of things. As for Luna, I planned on having Xaria approach her in the next chapter, but I'm having difficulty with how I should go about it.