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Arma_Akan

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  • Arma_Akan
    Arma_Akan2yr
    Commented

    is this the end of the arc?

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    Order Killer
    Action · KaGen
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  • Arma_Akan
    Arma_Akan2yr
    Commented

    final part of the chapter is breathtaking

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    Order Killer
    Action · KaGen
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  • Arma_Akan
    Arma_Akan2yr
    Commented

    it seems,show time!

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    Order Killer
    Action · KaGen
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  • Arma_Akan
    Arma_Akan2yr
    Commented

    Will these powerful servants join the battle too?

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    Order Killer
    Action · KaGen
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  • Arma_Akan
    Arma_Akan2yr
    Replied to Hiria

    Frankly, it affected me as well, but in a way that I will keep wondering and reading. it is a quite unusal beginning for a story.

    altalt
    Order Killer
    Action · KaGen
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  • Arma_Akan
    Arma_Akan2yr
    Replied to monstersells

    ok, thanks.

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    Deleted Novel-It All Started With Ligtning
    Fantasy · monstersells
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  • Arma_Akan
    Arma_Akan2yr
    Posted

    Good,very good...Quality of writing is quite high. Story is very fantastic and attractive. The character and monster presentations were also very effective. I felt like I was playing an rpg game...But...Update, update, more update pls..

    altalt
    SK: Dropped
    Fantasy · KaGen
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  • Arma_Akan
    Arma_Akan2yr
    Posted

    The novel iss full of the action, I read breathlessly especially chapter 3 and the next episodes. Amazing. But why did you change the story to Turkey Arc? Malaysia cases are still unsolved. Will the remaining teams participate the war in Turkey? Explain it please.

    altalt
    Order Killer
    Action · KaGen
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  • Arma_Akan
    Arma_Akan3yr
    Posted

    An amazing sample for a drama. I enjoyed it too much. Thanks for the author. Please keep going on to write the story...............................

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    Sinner
    Fantasy · Arife09
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  • Arma_Akan
    Arma_Akan3yr
    Posted

    Your writing effectiveness is increasing by the time. But you changed the story, where is the council of GM? Lizard and Shiny are still on action as I see but you erased the existence of Killer and Destroyer on the story? I cut your story development points, they were the trumph cards !

    altalt
    Regime Killer
    Eastern · KaGen
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  • Arma_Akan
    Arma_Akan3yr
    Posted

    These Gainj guy and his groups did not exist in the first version of this book. I remember it. Did you change the story? And about the roots, you did not answer but it seems I was righ.t

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    OK-Transferred
    Action · KaGen
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  • Arma_Akan
    Arma_Akan3yr
    Posted

    I realized this one today. It's a good one like the other (Regime killer). Writing quality is better in this. Is the monster appeared on chp5 a root? If so, is there any connection between the other novel? You should upload more.

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    OK-Transferred
    Action · KaGen
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  • Arma_Akan
    Arma_Akan3yr
    Posted

    a charming story. a good try for a drama. emotional scenes are too strong, you should publish more and more chapters. best wishes to the author.

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    Cuss Of Munzevi Pencil
    Urban · Linadilvin_Koc
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  • Arma_Akan
    Arma_Akan3yr
    Posted

    I see minor differences from previous version, did you revise the story too while editing other stuff? New cover is striking, you should add whole companions. But warning: Your wiki page's missing some characters backstories, you should fill that for Ghril and his comrades too.

    altalt
    Regime Killer
    Eastern · KaGen
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  • Arma_Akan
    Arma_Akan3yr
    Posted

    I was waiting for the new chapters but the current chapters has dissappeared. I see now, a new copy appeared, you've been contracted. I bookmarked this one. Good for you but there were many chapters, please upload them and go on for the riot chapters. + book's wiki is awesome, it's a good idea to check possible forgotten details on there.

    altalt
    Regime Killer
    Eastern · KaGen
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  • Arma_Akan
    Arma_Akan3yr
    Posted

    So Orb was the MC! You focused Heytu too much so he is MC what i though. What kind of style is this GOT? Addition, Orb is very overpowered for all chars, he might be good as wel as antagonist. What's the root thing 's coming? someone give copy please. This story is going on a high level in the beginning i liked it too much [img=exp]

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    RK: Contracted
    Fantasy · KaGen
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