Thank you so much for the great reveiw 😁 I'm so happy to know that my book has touched someone and that it's getting recommended. Fear not I will continue to do my best and do drop back regularly as there is more chapters to come 😊

Just to add, I checked the paragraphing and it's the device, it seems to make paragraphs at weird places, I normally type in bulk and don't use paragraphs, so maybe I should so that dosent happen.

Hey thanks for the review. I'll be sure to improve on what you've highlighted here, and I try to make my names as wacky as possible just so they stand out. Yeah there are alot and I mean alot of Latin inspired words and names in it 😊

I guess I'll be the first real reviewer of my own story, as no one has written one yet, please do leave a review and tell me what you think of my story, and also leave a rating as It would help a lot, thank you and I will get back to work.

My username is DegePlayz15

Thanks for the info much appreciated!