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IQCA

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A writer trying to improve. Contact me through discord: Iqca#5881

2020-11-25 JoinedGlobal
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  • IQCA
    IQCA1yr
    Replied to AkosiRen2323

    I just posted an auxiliary chapter. You can check it out. If you have further questions, just let me know. [img=recommend]

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  • IQCA
    IQCA1yr
    Replied to Davidham_

    That part was already cut off for the next chapter. Sorry 😅

    Zeus nodded. He'll just decide his next course of action when they get there. Shortly, he jumped on the back of the eagle, followed by Duke Kayn.
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  • IQCA
    IQCA1yr
    Replied to Tommyshelby

    Hmm...

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  • IQCA
    IQCA1yr
    Posted

    I am reviewing this book after posting chapter 20. First, for all who want to read my novel, this book is a harem. It could be 2, 3, or 4 girls and of course, there would be seggs in the later chapters. Next, you can judge the book however you want and I'll be willing to listen if you have suggestions that could fit into the story. Now onto the review. Writing Quality — I'm not going to give myself a 5 star mainly because of obvious reasons—my first language is not english. However, I assure you that this is at least readable based on grammarly and grammar checker apps 😏. Anyways, I promise I'm going to keep improving to deliver more well-written chapters. Story Development — Parts of it are a little cliche. As a matter of fact, all novels have clichés in them. However, the storyline as a whole will not. There would be mysteries and tensions at some arc. I already have the outline for the first 5 arcs so I could pretty much say that everything is going according to plan. Of course, in the end, it would be up to you guys if you want to continue reading. Character Design — I described them with a clear picture in my mind so I guess I'm good here. Even then, I'm gonna give it a 4 star. Update Stability — I'm planning to update 2 chaps per day in the future so stay tuned. World Background — The world background was already planned. In fact, I'm already making a map for future references. Although in the first 20 chapters, there are only hints of it, as the chapters go on, it will eventually get revealed. Here you'll find exotic lands and bizarre places with cool concepts. I have so much to say here but I won't spoil it anymore. This is my review. It might be a bit biased in your eyes because I'm the author. However, in the end, the choice is up to you. If you still don't like it after reading a bunch of chapters, I apologize for wasting your time. However, please accept my thanks for giving my novel a try. Thank you!

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  • IQCA
    IQCA1yr
    Replied to jesus_Orellana

    For character development. Chill.

    "Go on. I have to sort out my thoughts first."
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  • IQCA
    IQCA1yr
    Replied to unknownuserleft

    I'm planning to

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  • IQCA
    IQCA1yr
    Replied to jesus_Orellana

    Don't worry the mc won't be dense.

    "...it's not a dream."
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  • IQCA
    IQCA1yr
    Replied to MonstersAreLife

    That make sense 🤣

    If it's a normal 5 year old child, they might have complained by now or even quit. Unfortunately, Zeus' mentality wasn't that of a child.
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  • IQCA
    IQCA1yr
    Replied to 02_Zero_Two

    😏😏😏

    Ch 14 Conflict
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  • IQCA
    IQCA1yr
    Replied to Davidham_

    Just around the corner 😏. I don't want to spoil it hehe.

    No matter how much physical strength he has, without Aether, it would be like a bird with one wing.
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  • IQCA
    IQCA1yr
    Replied to 02_Zero_Two

    Thanks!

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  • IQCA
    IQCA1yr
    Commented

    Zeus' Dad:

    Ch 1 Zeus Walton
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  • IQCA
    IQCA1yr
    Posted

    It's me the author giving myself a 5 star review for this novel cause... I am going to support myself. Anyways, you can treat this as a question section and I'll do my best to answer them one by one.

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  • IQCA
    IQCA1yr
    Replied to Nikhils_Chand_16

    Thanks for reminding me! [img=recommend]

    Ch 91 Breaking The Stalemate
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  • IQCA
    IQCA1yr
    Commented

    Hans be like:

    Ch 88 Ruined King's Envoy
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  • IQCA
    IQCA1yr
    Commented

    The photo is not mine but this was the closest weapon appearance I could get.

    A/N: For anyone wondering what Gab's weapon looks like it's here.
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  • IQCA
    IQCA2yr
    Replied to Nikhils_Chand_16

    😂😂😂

    Ch 51 Final Struggle
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  • IQCA
    IQCA2yr
    Replied to Ahriman02

    After considering many times, I decided not to store the exp he gained after he reached bottlenecks. The reason is as you said, too broken. Hans can clap S-class monsters now while being at Level 50 which overall, is still considered as a low level. Additionally, the bottleneck quests would be a little meaningless for him if that happens. Also, he won't have that sense of urgency to unlock his level cap as soon as possible. There's also one more reason but it would be spoiling if I said it. Anyways, thank you.

    Ch 50 Urs and Hans vs Bloodbanes
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  • IQCA
    IQCA2yr
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    Ch 47 Art is an...
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  • IQCA
    IQCA2yr
    Replied to Heh_Heh
    Ch 45 Sir, you dropped something...
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