Sophie_Preston

lol 😋🥰

What about that,,, qi origin book.... Not a thorough author, i see. disappointing 😒😮‍💨

Well, the world building and concept was awesome but the author is a newbie. The sentence making seems to be forced not fluid. Character development, side character development is the worst i have ever seen. He is comparing the MC's 'Long' with a dragon....but chapter size is shorter than my PP. There are some illogical concept that author believes in,,,,such as MC can adjust his sudden increase in strength by practicing with needle and thread...

They both have superpowers and above mortal capabilities.... but they fell asleep doing 1 round. 😒😮‍💨

Sigh,,,,world building and concept was great but writing quality is not up to the mark 🙂🙂

what is this (So)???