Professor_Jelly0_0
Hi there, I am a person who just wants to write interesting and expressive stories that many people can love and enjoy reading.
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Professor_Jelly0_06mthCommentedCh 101 Planning- Professor_Jelly0_01yrCommentedCh 98 He’s Back
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foreshadowing
"That doesn't matter since I'll do whatever it takes." Akira didn't hesitate and seemed determined. - Professor_Jelly0_01yrCommentedCh 96 Contradiction
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Bro this 😭 I feel called out on this one
To rely on someone else. - Professor_Jelly0_01yrCommentedCh 95 Oh, Another Breakdown
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Bro great story, wonderfully written characters, plot is a *thick* luscious piece of pie that keeps me addicted with a sweet tooth and coming back for seconds. I'm always excited for an update because of how funny characters can be or because I can't wait to find out what happens next. Honestly if the author reads this I just wanna say chefs kiss, wonderfully perfect. It had inspired me to write and continued writing my own stories. Love it, keep it going, and if you ever feel stress don't feel bad about having a life, school is a priority after all and we understand. Just don't stress yourself and have fun writing because us readers are having fun reading.
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My man... Imma be happy for this moment (please don't let me regret it later. 😅)
"Oh, my God." I muttered for the third time as the scene of Akira kissing me replayed in my mind. - Professor_Jelly0_01yrCommentedCh 94 Choices Lead to Outcomes
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done and done 😎
Of course, that is a story for another time, let's not talk about it for the time being. - Professor_Jelly0_01yrCommented
You...you admit to killing your own babies...then...say to the guy..."I'll give birth to your children!"....you do realize how messed up that is. No promise made to keep those porr babies alive and the heartbreak he would have to go through. That other guy had to kill his own kids for you...sick and evil.
"Back then, as I wanted to prove my fertility abilities to you, I gave birth to a nest of baby eagles that year when I became an adult. But because I wanted to bear the first nest of baby wolves for you, I forced Quentin to smash all the eggs in the nest. I don't blame you for keeping me at a distance these few years and as long as you agree to mate with me, I ensure that once I go through estrus next spring, I'll mate with you and give birth to your first nest of baby wolves. Give up that Gu Mengmeng. We are entering winter and she is going through estrus now? This is destined that there wouldn't be a good ending. Even if both of you mate and she successfully become pregnant, do you think that her scrawny and fleshless little body could last her through the long winter? How is she able to give birth to healthy babies for you?" - Professor_Jelly0_01yrCommented
Clearly she hasn't had to deal with bees before, they are scary when they are small and have the numbers to attack you. In this world I wouldn't hesitate in thinking these bees are the size of fists 😰
Gu Mengmeng had a heartfelt despair, why were these people always going mad at minor issues? It was just some honey, did they have to go crazy about it? Was she imagining things? Why did she feel something was not right about the way the males were looking at her? It was…. it was like… damn are they thinking about eating her up?! - Professor_Jelly0_01yrCommented
my offer for this 'sweet' guy. (✷therapy✷)
Ryuu was definitely my favorite character out of the main three. He's strong and oddly innocent. The fact that he loves you enough to hurt you is so bittersweet. And what made it worse was he would always make sure the MC was treated after any violence. He's a sweet boy with a warped perspective. - Professor_Jelly0_01yrReplied to Professor_Jelly0_0
Also she is a b*tch. causes problems left and right, which is fine (because stuff need to happen to move the plot) but not when we are supposed to be siding with the character. Her hitting others and dragging them down for no reason is not cool. Like Collin who was hit because it was to.. intimate another character. Didn't work made her look *adorable* or something in the eyes of the males. The mate of her best friend dislikes her (due to jealousy) and admits she's annoying. (because of jealousy) despite this I like this guy because like she is annoying and pushy from the first time they have met. If my partner was best friends with this person I wouldn't like them either because they are bratty and b*tchy and up my ass about honey when everyone would want to kill me if they ever found out I took you to the honey cave.
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Honestly it's alright I'm just past the 100 chapter but the thing about this novel is you have to shut your brain off to read it. There are some inconsistent elements for the plot for example *spoiler* the honey. She gets a lot of honey from the tribe and I think that part gets forgotten about because in the next chapter she's trying to get more honey for some reason. Also lots of miscommunication between characters which is fine but when the time comes to correct the misunderstanding there is instead a lot of doubling down and making things more unclear for these beasts who don't understand what a 'daddy and mommy' is. Again that's fine for a character if that's how they are supposed to be personality wise or if will be addressed later. I think part of it is translation but that can go only so far and it falls on the author. Still only on a couple of chapters because I still find it an interesting read to shut my brain off for. But sometimes.. sometimes it gets rough. 😶
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Also forgotten to add this but like doesn't she already have honey? If she just wants to know we're it is she could have asked literally anyone else to just tell her the area. could have been disguised as "I want to know so I avoid that area 😰"
Ch 105 Hehehe - Professor_Jelly0_01yrReplied to Satpute_JanhaviCh 8 A Trail Of Webs
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Ha image if it gotten worse. 🙃
The sun glared at us, making it difficult to see what was in the clear sky above. I closed my eyes and continued in trying to calm down. I slowed my breathing while thinking about the tranquil environment around us. The rhythmic pace of Sorens steps swung me gently in an hypnotic way. His breathing was also slow while I could hear his heart thump ever so often. Soon I find myself escaping the world, taking in what was calming. I was grateful for this time for it allowed me to collect my thoughts. This peaceful time was plucked from the branches of out-stretched moments and placed somewhere away forever more. We had reached the Fruit Grove, it was now time to come back to the world around me and face Soren yet again.