I’ll try my best. Thanks for all the support. <3

If I really wanted to make a professional book, I would make sure to do the proper research before hand to make sure there are not any plotholes. But I just don’t want to do that as it would take most of my fun out of writing.

To be honest I don’t really plan out this story. I am writing mostly for fun, and as I am not the best writer there is going to be plotholes no matter what. So I would just rather ignore them and continue writing it however I want.

Don’t worry it wont

Yep.

Tbh I havent even watched the movies so probably not. But I think their are already enough opportunities for the MC to plunder.

I just checked and it says that he stayed with them for 3 years so I guess we are both wrong…

You think so?

He is a few years younger. He is 6 and the orphans are 9-10 on my fic at least. It is hard to get there ages proper but they we’r still kids when they were taught by Jiraiya I think

Sorry to hear that. I hope the rest of the story is to your liking. I myself feel that I havr already improved in my writing.

Sorry. I am not very good at writing, and I myself am not a very emotional person so it can be hard for me to portray emotions very well.

Good ideas! But I don’t think I will be going on the cresting a village route. That has already been done in ‘In Naruto: Reborn with talent’ a great novel btw. I will be taking some of your ideas though so thanks!

True. But I will just leave it how it is. Maybe in the future I will do something to fix the plot holes.

Tbh I don’t know. I don’t know if Zabuza’s age is ever mentioned in canon, All I know was he was alive and working as a ninja before yagura took over as the mizukage. Honestly he might be the same age as kakashi in canon, if you really need a reason just think this is an aged up au Zabuza.

Totally forgot about that. Will make sure to mention something about that in one of the later chapters. Thanks!

I also looked up the definition for fuinjutsu, but rather than just copying it I would rather make my own spin on it. It is definitely not just me being lazy knowing if I make one thing realistic, I will have to put in a lot of time doing research to make the rest realistic. ;)

I will try to get four, 1kish length chapters every day. I have them in a timer to release at 8,12,4, and 8 o clock est. I may increase or decrease the amount in the coming weeks depending on how I fare in the coming weeks. :)

After dropping my other fanfic, I decided to give writing another try, hopefully this one will last longer. This probably won’t be a harem. Hope you enjoy! :)

I thought it was more of a Senju thing as tsunade had it and used it to create her creation rebirth technique or whatever it is called. Maybe not though.

Maybe. Haven’t decided yet, if there is it will be very small.