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It was a good read, and easy to understand. The dialogues between the characters were always flowing. And really a sweet tale. And I highly recommend it.
I liked your writing, it makes me keep reading without stopping. The author knew how to develop the story well, and the character design. I'm not one to read fantasy stories but this one I highly recommend.
And the moment the man stood in the center of the room, well below the light. Naomi stood alert to the mysterious figure of this tall, stocky man who exuded the scent of danger, with long black hair and amber eyes, white skin, and with a snake tattoo starting from his jaw and extending to his neck and disappearing under the formal clothes he wore.
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You have a good quality of writing. The way the author described the characters' lives, emotions, feelings and ideas, came very close to the reality we live in.