im doing the story anymore. something came Up and im stressing out so im not doing it anymore

Ill make sur to check your story out too.

Thanks anyway. you are being very helpful.

Please check out my new, extended sypnosis. It will increase as more characters enter the story.

Thank you so much. i hope you will put the book in your library and i will continue updating. Next update on Tuesday!

Now that i think about It my plan was to post a chapter every week day. this may have cause the shortness of the chapters. Mabey i can write every 2 days and smoosh the 2 chpters into one. Thanks again

Thank You this Is extremely helpful

Sure no problem. i hope you can check out mine called big feelings.

I like the plot however I feel like you have rushed into the story a bit. It would be better if you kind of lead yourself into the story like her getting up or sitting up and then she wonders where ray is. Rushing the story made want to rush the reading of that makes sense. The story is great though. Keep it up![img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend]

if you continue reading he says how do you allow me to call you that. its a nickname sorry for the misunderstanding.

No problem it was fun. i just realised that i posted it twice sorry about that.

Im reviewing the first chapter of your book and its really good. I was interested from the start. there are some grammatical mistakes and the placement of some words Can be corrected. i hope you dont mind if i copy the whole thing and correct it for you. Overall its a great story carry on! AlSo help review my First 3 chapters of my story called big feelings.