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Toruu

Toruu

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I'm Toru :)

2020-11-23 JoinedGlobal
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  • Toruu
    Toruu23d
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    OK, let's go. The protagonist... I liked that he has a backstory and that he is having personality development, as reading about some protagonists that have appeared recently was tiring me a little. His family... so far I'm enjoying his interaction with his family, I think it could improve in some parts, mainly to show him developing more with his mother, since so far the contact with her hasn't been that much, but with his siblings and father are great. Is the system... an OP system? Yes, but less than I thought it would be. From what I read in the synopsis, I thought he would really become the best singer in the world in a few days, but the development is much more realistic, which is much better, since if it were like the synopsis I don't know if I would be able to read it. . I'm seeing your clickbait Nunu! Update stability... so far it's ok, the chapters are long, from what I've seen it already has some advanced chapters, so I don't have much to comment on that. The background of the world... so far is being explained slowly, there is still a lot that hasn't been shown, so I won't say whether it's good or bad, but what has been shown so far is very consistent. Overall, a 4.8/5, keep posting and I'll keep reading :)

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  • Toruu
    Toruu8mth
    Replied to Brent_6064

    poor him lol

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  • Toruu
    Toruu8mth
    Replied to hero4hire

    Yes :3

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  • Toruu
    Toruu8mth
    Replied to Hayate_Ayasaki_

    Nop :)

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  • Toruu
    Toruu8mth
    Replied to Random_exe

    I will not put anything with flirtations, maybe on the part of other people liking him, but not him. Only when he's older. There will be no harem.

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  • Toruu
    Toruu9mth
    Replied to 8Mysterious8

    Thanks!

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  • Toruu
    Toruu9mth
    Replied to OutofideasLOL

    OK <3 [img=recommend]

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  • Toruu
    Toruu9mth
    Replied to Daoist_N1CK

    Do not exist

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  • Toruu
    Toruu9mth
    Replied to Mobius_5trip

    Not for the next few chapters!

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  • Toruu
    Toruu9mth
    Replied to tt_g

    I literally wrote in the synopsis that this would be an alternate reality where I would change information about the wizarding world. I advised that if you weren't willing to open your mind, then don't read the fanfic. If you haven't read this, I can't help it.

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  • Toruu
    Toruu9mth
    Replied to Azathoth2

    No

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  • Toruu
    Toruu9mth
    Replied to _Sword_Immortal

    My plan was to develop some of Ron's stats and put the System in when he enters Hogwarts, but I think I'll put them in earlier so I don't get too carried away. If you have another suggestion, you can tell me too :)

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  • Toruu
    Toruu9mth
    Replied to Eunus

    Not my current goal, but maybe further down the line c:

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  • Toruu
    Toruu9mth
    Replied to Dark_B

    It will take a while because I intend to develop a part of Ron to change the course of the standard story.

    Ch 3 Chapter 3 - Forget!
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  • Toruu
    Toruu9mth
    Posted

    Toru's 5-star rating I'm excited about the story I'm creating, so expect many more chapters. This soap opera has an editor reviewing each chapter, so I'm confident with her performance. Hope you like it :)

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  • Toruu
    Toruu1yr
    Replied to NeaCambelt

    Ok :)

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  • Toruu
    Toruu1yr
    Replied to Bob_the_zombie

    Paollo is not Poseidon. Try another.

    Ch 66 Chapter 66 - "I Don't Believe It's You!"
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  • Toruu
    Toruu1yr
    Replied to MrJust

    It ended up giving an error in the chapter and I can't delete it lol I posted the right chapters. I'm without a computer these days to fix

    Ch 68 Error Chapter
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  • Toruu
    Toruu1yr
    Replied to Daoisty8Kybm

    hard to please everyone

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  • Toruu
    Toruu1yr
    Replied to Crazy_Moe

    I started using it in later chapters. I think it has improved, I see almost no grammatical complaints like before. I need to tidy up these first few chapters, but I'm too busy.

    "Oh no! Now it's time for family dinner. I'll deal with work issues later," she said, putting her cell phone in her pocket. "And you named me two girls. Are you interested in one of them, are you?", she said with a laugh. "I remember last year you were scared to death to talk to girls. I'm glad I'm able to make friends now", she added, biting into her snack right after.
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