Fallenmonger

Shameless lol I love it!

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I love the story itself, love the characters my only complaint is we don’ need to hear what rank and circle or star that Leo or other characters are at every other paragraph. Like we get that 2 sentences ago he was a 3 circle mage going to do battle with a creature but mid fight you talk about how he Is a 3rd circle mage and it will be so hard for him. You can be to redundant in his development. Other than that I love the world you have made and the characters.

Any new chapters going to come or is this dead? It has been awesome up to this point please continue u to release!!!

Loving the story man you are killing it keep up the good work!

Awesome so far! How many chapters a day for now?

See this! I just gifted the story: Pizza