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How dare you, send the next chapter NOW! Also, just take my power stones.

I really like the story but my one and only issue is that some things are over-explained. For example, in a chapter a character is said to be nervous and then there are 2-3 paragraphs that explain why they are nervous, which is fine, but then within same chapter it is said that the character is nervous 1-2 more times and every time there is a 1 paragraph summary of the 2-3 paragraphs mentioned beforehand. However, for the sake of story I am willing to read those as well. It is just that author is used to doing this frequently. I can confidently claim that author mastered writing without adding more context. For better understanding, you can read the chapters carefully and see if there is something mentioned that was already mentioned within the chapter.

Even if it is cute, it makes me feel kind of bad for him. Because he never had someone to make him a better person, even though it is not entirely true and he wont actually become a good person but maybe kinder or less ruthless.

Itachis ilness about to flare up, he just got nerfed before his fight.

That cracked me up 🤣. Now I can only imagine sasuke vs. Itachi fight scene as sasugai vs. Itachi

Come on, where is my "you will regret this, Hiruzen"?

For some reason I just remembered this from opm.