Billy_Zhao_6493

Honestly the story is great, and I enjoyed reading it. The characters are well designed, and have some backstory to them. The world while not unique is still interesting, since its not too repetitive. My only main issue with this is that the grammar is really bad, and can make it hard to read. Which is a real shame since otherwise this would have been a perfect novel.

I honestly didn't expect much, but i got to say, 7 chapters in and this has turned into one of my favorite fanfics.

the story might seem bad at first but gets better later on. At first the world building was pretty trash, ,and it was confusing. However the author develops it more as the story progresses, and fills in the missing parts.

Although I have only read about 100 chapters, I can say that so far this is an excellent novel. The characters are well designed, with an interesting plot that moves at a good pace. The grammar is also pretty good. The only bad thing so far would be the world building. There wasn't really an explanation on how dungeons appeared, what happened to the world, or why people have a system that gives money

honestly these chapters where the parents just talk are really boring. I know its for to introduce new characters. But i feel like its doesn't need to take so many chapters

lol, love that the parents have a bet with each other on what will be their children's first words. its a small detail, but it really makes the characters seem more real

its a good novel to read in your spare time. The actions scenes for the most part aren't too long, and the world building is nice. But the romance is really frustrating. there are so many love triangles, and the MC is really stupid in romance

it should be imprint not impregnating

amazing story. it is even better than the original series. it isn't a copy of the original series The interactions between Quinn and the main characters are very funny to read. finally the romantic subplot adds a nice break to all the action.

really, you are saying a ward will prevent bullying. good luck with that buddy even if you ban certain words they will just come up with new words that by pass it