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Thank you a lot for your review. And yeah that was basically my goal, writing a character like Calamitas from Soundless death was definitely the highlight of last year for me, but now I'm trying a different approach, and approach where Vita, the main character, does things on a whim while using maths in the story was definitely a hard choice, but it was fun so I added it.
The plot is great, but that's not the best thing about it... THE AUTHOR IS AN ABSOLUTE LEGEND WHEN IT COMES TO COLD LINES, you would be reading and BOOM, A SUPER COLD LIKE DROPPED AND JUST LIKE THAT YOU ARE NOW EXCITED TO READ WHAT'S NEXT, the description is great too. Overall a great read.
THE STORY IS MAGNIFICENT I mean the way you wrote all the chapters was weird and bizarre but like in a good way It was as if I was watching a movie And my favorite chapter is the 4th I mean the confusion in that chapter and the way you show the mc's powers were fantastic I can't even understand how are you so good at describing I literally pictured the scenes in my head and it was quite frightening to be honest
Emotion sharing is like nothing compared to what is coming, and for anyone thinking that it isn't that interesting of a power and that it didn't really deserve being that happy about it. Remember, he wasn't happy about the power. He was happy that there is a supernatural realm in the first place.