girls he wants maybe - they too young not born important to plot Even ringo not there, he care not for her. But story still good so maybe not large harem. More chapter before other grow up. if other people in harem. He should go other village to get girls.

Thank you i cant wait for when they met. I dont like when they separate and if met after along time it will not be special like before. I dont want to forget about her in future and seeing her would not be interesting anymore after seeing stronger things and better people from higher place. But you good writer and make things interesting. I was just worried because it happens in other books like this. Irreversible change and Unavoidable meeting is good.

Thanks you good book but when new harem member found they disapear i am sad.

I dont care about this bird brain, but the reason author say are dumb. looks like chapter for author to flex. i bring useless person then defend why i no care about her. and right <period.> the chapter was waste, konan could just stick seal on her and leave after if you dont want to change plot. lame

You write he ok with break up because he does not touch her. confusion. he understood why she sleep with ji yoling infront of her. confusion again. i know he sensetive about green hat. but i dont understand why write the sad past and make it sound ok. It was ntr in front of him. not ok. and ji yoling not good and make her sound like she help him. it sound like you want him to be firend with ji yoling.

sweet, they always smiling and happy.

No one accepts NTR obvious. He start bromance with Ji yoling? why he says he ok with it. he has not done-it with saintes Fang jinfei he ok with she sleeping with stronger person 2?

TO make clear M saves MC. MC responds and give her to owner F (who wanted to kill him), MC makes owner (F) strong and young. M still does not want, F. MC gives (enemy) F another women to make M jelous. MC makes M feel alone and schemes so she can go to F (her owner). This is how MC treats his only friend.

It is best novel I read. MC is good, story good, characters good, world good. It says Harem but it seems like a couple only and doesn't seem to change. I mind either path. But good to know which way story goes. Some repeat of same description of green and red colors at different times for different things. But good writing. also don't forget to have chapter of rest and normal life after fights. I think it would be good. It is great. recommended.

Fix tags please a lot missing. Story is good, Author offers you Evil MC and you get Evil MC. When you read this you should keep morals hidden in high shelf. The story has good MC, story, world and characters. MC is smart, all this time only make 1 mistake, is acceptable. I read dumb MC novels make mistakes every 2 chapters. So no problem. It is a good novel and you should read it but beware R-18, rape alot, not sure about romance or comedy in this novel maybe later? (Chapter 113) He is a vampire but no use vampire powers? why? Anyway evil MC novel. Keep working on novel, it is different and good.

He gave Marina to Franz not enough, gives julia too, now schemes against Marina forcing her to run back to franz by making her alone and without anyone as he no responds to her. Maybe in new arc Franz is MC now

TO not gave much away here is what to expect before reading Starts off good and you get a scrawny kid uses mind to climb to better life as slave. Faces hardship grows and the torture gets to him turns him seeking hurt (Masochist). Foriegn forces intereferes yet he perseveres. All of a sudden things go down from their. As the author claims he pays good deeds and bad deeds. NOT true. At a point you take him as an Evil MC and accept his action. Somethings I can not accept is to empower his enemy and also to give up on his friend/saviour and gets same enemy more girls by spending a lot of money. I could accept all his evil, but this was my bottom-line. There might be some clever scheme of MC or whatever but when the person involved in this perhaps the only relatable, human person that helped the MC it is no longer something I can endure. Good luck with your work and continue on. You are a good writer unfortunately the story is no longer for me. Do not be discouraged, this is not my niche story. Below is a summery of why I gave up, it contains spoilers. 1 - MC starts off a slave and you wish him well 2 - MC climbs in rank - gets pushed into situation by F where everyone dies 3 - MC survives barely with the help of F's *** slave M 4 - He gets know M and kisses her, they are close now 5 - She wishes to be free - he tries and helps her 6 - He gets out of situation but does not really take revenge, In facts delays it (You can assume he is a masochist for it to understand ) 7 - He later goes some where and does some stuff taking more punishment, heartache turns to a welcoming mat 8 - He had some fights looking good for him, but his plans fail because of an annoying person, but uses a mother figure to get back affection 9 - story gets good, he is not a zombie that getting spit on, but haves fun with an alter-ego 10 - M who has saved him is given to F her old owner, F who also wanted to kill him is improved with his unique gift and MC schemes against M - He gives F another beutiful girl, when things do not go his way - he is now against M to make her jelous and alone, so she can run back to her old owner.