Akion_Quazson
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I call myself a creator... What do I create? We'll see.
2020-11-20 JoinedUnited States
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Akion_Quazson1yrCommentedCh 8 Thank you for everything!- Akion_Quazson1yrCommented
Like mother, like daughter.
Mei right now was at the point that if she used her full power she could destroy a world if she wanted to. Luckily she was not targeting the planet itself. Otherwise… Grandpa Mu Shivered again. 'Why is this cute little girl becoming more and more like her mother!?' - Akion_Quazson1yrCommented
Deus Ex Mother...
Golden light spread throughout the capital, the magic circle that those below were desperately trying to create instantly reformed, and changed into an even more sophisticated design. Everyone who was in the rooms was forced out while a blue barrier that seemed thicker than the castle walls surrounded it. Inside dozens of magic circles appeared all spinning in unison seemingly all part of one another. The barrier that once surrounded the capital was now bigger and even better than before. The landmass the capital sat on rose even higher into the air and hovered steadily as if nothing had ever happened. - Akion_Quazson1yrCommented
New Loeri is a grump.
"Humph! Suit yourself." Not saying anything more Loeri quickly followed after Alicia. - Akion_Quazson1yrCommentedCh 1 The End And Beginning Of Everything
- Akion_Quazson1yrCommentedCh 33 The Die Is Cast
- Akion_Quazson1yrCommentedCh 24 Dark Days Part 2
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Sounds familiar...
"I promise. I won't overdo it." Not that I could. My mana never went down, thankfully. If it did, I do not think I would like magic as much. Now that I think about it, I wonder what would have caught my interest if I only had limited mana. Maybe cooking? Sewing? I have no idea, to be honest. But it probably would have been cooking since I do enjoy it a little bit. I just don't like doing dishes or the prep work…. - Akion_Quazson1yrCommented
I feel like this is the 7-year-old Faith talking...
I may be excited and want to figure out my system after waiting seven long years. But…. That did not mean I did not value my little life. Whether I will have a tough life as a demi human or not, I did not care. I planned to make the best out of this new chance of life that I was given. If I am shunned from villages, towns, and cities, then I will just roam the land and become a vagabond. I had no true goals except being strong enough to protect everything I cared about. Oh, and beating up Trent. I will not give up until I finally give him a good beating! - Akion_Quazson1yrCommentedCh 11 The Bond Between A Mother And Daughter Part 1
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Busted...
This paragraph has been deleted. - Akion_Quazson2yrCommentedCh 25 Legion of Light (Part 6)
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... Well, ouch.
"Liam, I'll give it to you straight. You are weak." - Akion_Quazson2yrReplied to Aradhya_Majumder
I haven't pointed out spelling errors, because it's still readable with them, but there have been. The Liam/Luca mixups are a touch harder to read past.
This paragraph has been deleted. - Akion_Quazson2yrReplied to Aradhya_Majumder
Self-inserts are pretty easy, I can agree there. The MC in my current project is a self-insert too. And you're right. It is quite a bit harder to write other characters. Especially if the self-insert is a side character, and not the perspective of the readers.
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