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NotSloth

NotSloth

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2020-11-18 JoinedUnited States
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  • NotSloth
    NotSloth1mth
    Commented

    >:3

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    The Transmigrated Author
    Fantasy ¡ zowji
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  • NotSloth
    NotSloth1yr
    Commented

    U gotta use different emojis u can’t expect me to see the 💀 and not laugh

    9. Legion of Death 💀👹 (???) ]
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    You Can't NTR This Villain (Hiatus For A While)
    Fantasy ¡ Yorushin
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  • NotSloth
    NotSloth1yr
    Commented

    RIP Techno W Minecraft player

    I looked curiously at the guy which is called the greatest player of WorldCraft. He might be like 'Technoblade' of Minecraft.
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    Parallel Memory
    Fantasy ¡ SomDxD
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  • NotSloth
    NotSloth1yr
    Commented

    I’m sorry but prince is already taken it’s my dogs name get a better one.

    He paused as he thought again; "How about Prince? You feeling the name Prince?"
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    I Indeed don't Know How to Cultivate
    Fantasy ¡ different_minds
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  • NotSloth
    NotSloth2yr
    Commented

    I sear to god this dudes dumb honest to god shouldve said he doenst like women touching him would made boundaries

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  • NotSloth
    NotSloth2yr
    Commented

    Ty for chapter, but ong i hope rem just skips the rookie tournament calling it a sick day would be funny

    Ch 148 After the tryouts [2]
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    The Author's POV
    Fantasy ¡ Entrail_JI
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  • NotSloth
    NotSloth2yr
    Commented

    Post nut clarity just hits diff bro 😔

    "Sigh...I don't want to be horny anymore...I just want to live a happy and eventful life.." I sighed, placing my arm over my eyes. "Ugh...tomorrow I have class as well. Life is great.."
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    Destiny Harem
    Fantasy ¡ AisuruOfficial
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  • NotSloth
    NotSloth2yr
    Commented

    Just wondering u get inspiration from the novels extra? Would also be great if the ending wasnt scuffed like that ones

    Ch 56 Hollberg [2]
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    The Author's POV
    Fantasy ¡ Entrail_JI
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  • NotSloth
    NotSloth2yr
    Commented

    TRUE

    Literally anyone else could have been transmigrated into this world and they could've avoided more flags than me.
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    [ONLY ON WATTPAD] The Mob Character Shouldn’t Have a Yandere Harem?!
    Fantasy ¡ UnknownFate25
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  • NotSloth
    NotSloth2yr
    Posted

    (Sry but this is my first review so no flame pls) Writing Quality 5/5 -No major noticeable grammar errors, sentences flow nicely and the entire progression doesn't feel like a headache to read, there might be some errors but small enough to not really care about Stability of Updates 3/5 -I started reading this about a month ago and there have only been 2 updates so far and looking at the previous chapter updates it seems the author only writes when he has time so going into this you should realize there might only be 2 chapters one month and 10 the next its not really stable and depends on the authors time which in no way is bad but you should realize it isn't gonna be consistently updated. Story 5/5 -So far the plot hasn't gone that far its still kinda early game, but from what I've read I liked it. Volume 1 is honestly amazing, there are no noticeable things that tilted me. Volume 2 wasn't as good as 1 but that has to mainly have to do with characters but the overall plot direction and how it's progressing is still strong so no real problems. Characters 4/5 -Main character is exactly as you see in the tags he's cold, calculative, and manipulative. He also has the feel of a real person a little in the sense of how he feels alone which I could personally relate to some of his thoughts, The only real thing I can nitpick at is how in volume 2 he seems softer mainly due to the girl he butlering for. (IDK if butlering is a word but whatever) Side characters-Most are forgettable no real characters that I care for other than the MC and maybe the girl he's watching over, but that mainly has to do with short chapters and not enough time to get to know them but most of them I can't even remember. Worldbuilding 4/5 -the only reason it isn't 5 is that the plot is still in the early game so we dont know the whole world or have a grand picture so there is a possibility to mess up, but overall I'm really interested and I wanna know what's around and build a picture of it in my mind. Overall I think this is a solid read and you should read it only real downside is the update frequency, but I loved it it also gave me some My Death Flags Show No Sign of Ending and a little bit of The Villainous Daughter’s Butler I Raised Her to be Very Cute.

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    Is It Okay For An Antagonist To Save The World?
    Fantasy ¡ cier_Tempest
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  • NotSloth
    NotSloth2yr
    Commented

    -_-

    ""...""
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    Is It Okay For An Antagonist To Save The World?
    Fantasy ¡ cier_Tempest
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