Nicole_P2

just call it a sting ray.

fix your book the pages don't work after chapter 30 and I already paid for them

ding woman is the step mum. the mums name was Lady lu/liu or something at least get the names correct

fix it teir 3 should be 4 when he's in level 42

go pattamon

on second or third upgrade after a year he could receive and un graded spirit vien he can extract 500 low spirit stones out for his army or fire atifact work.

plus they excellent twice instead of good but I think the order should go (ordinary,nice,excellent) still means good but won't get confused in translation.

why not stipulate that lower numbers are worth more when looking at lots. all you said was that the gold mushroom was with more but the purple thunder essence was worth more to you. that's not explained at all because he always picks the higher number and seems more happy. yes for safety but be more clear bout intrinsic value.

it's 30 cold wheat not 5

🛑 stop pumping your backup chapters into paid extra content and keep a stock of chapters for when you have delays. Then it's not so much an issue. (No shade I love your work. Build a backup of 5ch to give a buffer to yourself to start.)