Interesting Capter And I hope he doesn't keep up with elena bullshit, I really don't like her She is terrible freind, sister among other things

Very interesting Capter

Just try The Doom Story capter 1 and you will know that the grammar is good And the story is interesting as well

I enjoy this Story Characters World building And the Grammar I really hope that you don't F doom up by making him a doormat like your flash Story. where the guy acts like he can't even controll himself when he sees a woman Other than everything is perfect I hope the Story continues like this )

Very Entertaining Thanks for the capter

Will he get Sage Force Powers. The Sage Force seems to /enhance the intelligence/ of its conduits to /super-genius levels/ as well as granting them psychic powers such as /Telepathy and Telekinesis/