I like Ralph, a funny dude. Also awsome book cover

This is good. it has a hook, the starting of a mystery, and background details I bet this story is going to go far

Please let me know your opinions on my story. I know it isn't the most creative or well-written and the grammar is kinda bad. However, I appreciate all who read this

Please let me know your opinions on my story. I know it isn't the most creative or well-written and the grammar is kinda bad. However, I appreciate all who read this.

i think it's written well. you can really feel the mood of our kobald freind and his haphazardly friends

i am really loving whats going on with the story and i hope it continues to be this good still

sorry im not used to writing pasisve Flirting but im trying. ill be introducing a new character soon i think youll like

life is a harsh reality, and not all can endure. A sad situation some find themselves

i think im gunna like martha

it looks good. ill be watching for it.[img=update]

author here enjoy ill be updating chapters slowly

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