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Lievel's Review Alt. Account. I'll read a few chapters in the beginning of your book, and then give an honest review. 👍👍

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  • Lievel_Review
    Lievel_Review3yr
    Commented

    Ah...those days...

    'Yeah. I remember God Eater when it wasn't released in the west yet. I had to work hard finding where to craft weapons.'
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    The Legend of Astra
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    Actually, he didn't know how he got there, so maybe he got sniped without knowing.

    "I got isekai'd?! Did truck-kun learn to snipe?!" I screamed as I crouched, holding my head.
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    Lievel_Review3yr
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    I vote for EXP! Even if its my own work! [img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp]

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    Lievel_Review3yr
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    Lievel_Review3yr
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  • Lievel_Review
    Lievel_Review3yr
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    Well...the confusing start, and the script-like writing style is making the story even more confusing. Imagination can make do about the extremely brief descriptions, but the details are completely unknown making it hard for readers to immerse themself in the book. If you need guides about making novels, try reading 'The Book of Authors' its free and it will definitely help you improve The premise of the story isn't bad, but there is still a lot to learn since its only at the very beginning. I'm looking forward to see if you get improvements👍👍

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  • Lievel_Review
    Lievel_Review3yr
    Commented

    Hmmm...interesting. I've never read script written books before so somehow, it really got its own merits. Well, the story is lacking in descriptions. The details you give makes the difference between a play script and a novel. Also, it somehow feels...robotic? maybe its because I'm not used to reading scripts. Well, the only biggest flaw in this is the lack of details so you might wanna think about abandoning the script-like writing style.

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    Lievel_Review3yr
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  • Lievel_Review
    Lievel_Review3yr
    Posted

    Yep. This book quite a decent one if you start reading it. has good start. and I highly recommend it to TDG fans 👍👍👍👍 [img=recommend][img=recommend]

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    Reincarnation of The #1 Magic Caster
    Fantasy · Happy_soul
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  • Lievel_Review
    Lievel_Review3yr
    Commented

    Yep. Thi is quite similar in many concepts to my novel, but it most resembles TDG. It's quite well made too. 👍👍👍👍

    Ch 2 Cultivation at the Dark Energy Lake
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    Reincarnation of The #1 Magic Caster
    Fantasy · Happy_soul
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