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Lievel's Review Alt. Account. I'll read a few chapters in the beginning of your book, and then give an honest review. 👍👍
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Ah...those days...
Actually, he didn't know how he got there, so maybe he got sniped without knowing.
Well...the confusing start, and the script-like writing style is making the story even more confusing. Imagination can make do about the extremely brief descriptions, but the details are completely unknown making it hard for readers to immerse themself in the book. If you need guides about making novels, try reading 'The Book of Authors' its free and it will definitely help you improve The premise of the story isn't bad, but there is still a lot to learn since its only at the very beginning. I'm looking forward to see if you get improvements👍👍
Hmmm...interesting. I've never read script written books before so somehow, it really got its own merits. Well, the story is lacking in descriptions. The details you give makes the difference between a play script and a novel. Also, it somehow feels...robotic? maybe its because I'm not used to reading scripts. Well, the only biggest flaw in this is the lack of details so you might wanna think about abandoning the script-like writing style.
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