Has the potential to be at the level of really great novels like shadow slave and the author's POV. Love the writing style and the pace keep it up author.

to be honest , i really like the story even though its a little bit slow paced . The writing style is really nice and i enjoyed it. keep it up author !

best fanfic of all dragon ball fics out there it's so unique and intresting. keep going author u have my support !