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Fallen_Life7mthCommentedso the departed i believe
What kind of story did "Miscreant" tell?- Fallen_Life8mthCommentedCh 33 Enlightened
- Fallen_Life8mthCommentedHis rage alone had dissolved any suspicions Yoruichi harbored about his intentions. Someone who cherished his companions so deeply couldn't truly have an evil heart.
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It started off great, but it quickly turned into a typical overpowered fic that are so common in this site. First of all, he hasn't even left the island and already know all three types of haki. By chapter 15 he can already look into the future... And get this, by the next chapter he can actually swim without any side effects... Not to mention that without him being taught by a sword master can already send out slashes through the air. It takes out any kind of conflict or any sort of challenge out of the story. Nevertheless, good luck to the author, I know it can be a hard writing a story and please don't let this review demotivate you!
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GODA at its finest
"Ace! Luffy!" Sabo called out to his two best friends. "I'm really, REALLY, serious about being a pirate! Someday, I'll get out of this island and live freely! Then, I'll write a book about all my adventures!" - Fallen_Life8mthReplied to Kingelano1
Have you actually seen One Piece? There are the five elders, CP0, ex-admiral Khong, plus all their bodyguards. Good luck trying to pass through all of them
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So he's racing with Audi?
I was feeling very tired so I went to slumber land. I had failed to notice a man standing beside my mother, a tall man with dark brown hair and wearing frameless spectacles had a big smile on his round/oval face, with his brown eyes beaming with happiness. - Fallen_Life9mthCommented
It depends on the piece of fiction. If its Marvel then it doesn't make much sense, but since in One Piece everyone names their attacks I dont see any problem with it.
What are your thought on named attacks? Should it be a thing or not? - Fallen_Life10mthCommentedHuh. Well that's interesting. I wonder what sort of options will pop up the further I go down. Perhaps Shadow Ant? Daemon Ant? Whatever is in the fourth strata?
- Fallen_Life10mthCommented"Yes, breathing only through your mouth can cause hyperventilation, and breathing only through your nose may not provide enough oxygen. The optimal way to breathe is to use both your nose and mouth to inhale and exhale, which allows for maximum oxygen intake." I recited what I'd read.
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- Fallen_Life10mthReplied to TsuKiiz
fire- maybe starfire nature- poison ivy shadows- catwoman unpredictability- harley quinn strength- lola or maybe diana idk
Cassandra smiled, her lips curling mischievously. "Ah, the dance of fate is delicate," she replied. "Among the myriad of souls, you shall meet, there are those who embody fire, shadows, unpredictability, nature, and strength. - Fallen_Life10mthCommented"Zz... This is Captain Jack Bauer, code 127-8907-0067, over."
- Fallen_Life11mthCommented
there´s a fanfic called The New Normal - A Pokémon SI by CartecFF in which the mc specializes in normal-type Pokemon and has as a love interest Karen.
I've never seen her as a love interest in a fanfic so I thought she would be interesting to have in this one. - Fallen_Life11mthCommented
thanks for the commitment!
*A/N: I know in movies shes taller, but in the actual written book 4, Harry mentioned and I'm quoting out of the book here, 'theres maybe an inch difference in heights' between the two of them. I've been re-reading it for research ahaha* - Fallen_Life1yrCommented
are you rewriting it?
- Some people know about this story and its circumstances, while others don't. To those who know, thank you for waiting, even though I promised to release it a few weeks ago. I know I am late, but my mental health has not been the best. Sorry about the delay in uploading the story. - Fallen_Life1yrCommented"Gelnn, did you get to see the movie 'The book of secrets?" Airon asked as he looked at Glenn.
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Author, I am pretty sure this fanfic was already in fan fiction.net It was called Devil's Eyes or something like that. Are you the same or do you have permission to post this?
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