since the British keep making a nuisance of themselves just to keep Napoleon busy in war.How would using the Irish as a nuisance to the British whether it's to recruit them or send in agents to sneak into Britain sabotage key industry areas burn ships, meanwhile riling the Irish to declare independence it's just an idea

the story is great thus far, only problem I see is, that the MC Raphael is too much of a wimp towards his sister and from the direction is going it looks like he will have be SISCON

You can look up the DREYSE needle gun it was the first Breech Loading Bolt Action Rifle invented in 1836 by German Gun Smith Johan Nikolaus Von Dreyse The cartridge used with this rifle consisted of the paper case, the bullet, the percussion cap and the black powder charge. The 15.4 mm (0.61 in) bullet was shaped like an acorn, with the broader end forming a point, and the primer attached to its base. That could be the next leap in weapons technology in this book. I can't hardly wait.

On paper: Socialism sounds like it could work, BUT here's the real kicker why it's doomed to fail, "HUMANS ARE SELFISH" it's a trait of survival ro have more then tour neighbors, wanting more power and authority, wanting more material things or wealth, wanting more women and most beautiful, that's how men have created great or not so great societies. if you can breed out selfishness out of humans then maybe can socialism work, until then it's doomed to fail.

this is going to be sweet 😋

Up to a point having more than one woman is great but God's the headaches are never worth it, look into Ottoman Harem intrigues by God if I had been king I've would kill all harem members

classic runaway story now that would be an adventure and bring more excitement to the story

I love reading this type of development stories BUT!!! if it's taking place in the 1470s period in history just so you know TOMATOES were NOT known in Europe until the Spaniards brought back all types of food from Mexico such as Tomatoes, Jalapeños, Potatoes, Squash, Maize Corn, Pineapple from the Caribbean, Passion Fruit, but I do realize that Authors can give themselves freedom in their writing but some people like the background details but overall I love the flow of the story