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    Alex_Patino_171120 days ago
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    Spreading disease deliberately, was also detrimental to the invaders because they could also become sick, from their own sickness. the only reason smallpox was able to spread quickly was because ALL natives in the Americas had never had contact with European diseases therefore they had NO immunity & fell faster because of it, similar to the Bubonic plague or Black death, the Europeans died by the thousands

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    Alex_Patino_17113 months ago
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    you can keep the Beer Hall Putsch, but you could add Muller lead a more critical protest against the Weimar Government. Possibly a change sooner rather than the elections in 1933, just a suggestion. it's hard to keep up with all things that happened.

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    Alex_Patino_17114 months ago
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    more

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    Alex_Patino_17114 months ago
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    Migration should also come with Duties and Responsibilities for the MIGRANTS, and those should include: Must be willing to learn the host nations's language. Must be willing to work & contribute to their new nation & community. Since the immigrant decided to leave their home country, they should strive to ASSIMILATE to their new home nation. Except that the nation you decide to live in: that nation has its own culture and customs. you don't have to like them, but you don't have the right to try to restrict it either

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    Alex_Patino_17114 months ago
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    I enjoy Nation/Kingdom Building writings/books: This one shows great promise, I hope to see "MORE" chapters I can't hardly wait. This far it has a moderate character building, & what I mean is: with it's not to slow but not to fast paced, it's just perfect for an enjoyable read, and I would need more chapters to give a more fair review, thus far I enjoyed the story as is.

  • Alex_Patino_1711
    Alex_Patino_1711a year ago
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    since the British keep making a nuisance of themselves just to keep Napoleon busy in war.How would using the Irish as a nuisance to the British whether it's to recruit them or send in agents to sneak into Britain sabotage key industry areas burn ships, meanwhile riling the Irish to declare independence it's just an idea

  • Alex_Patino_1711
    Alex_Patino_17112 years ago
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    the story is great thus far, only problem I see is, that the MC Raphael is too much of a wimp towards his sister and from the direction is going it looks like he will have be SISCON

  • Alex_Patino_1711
    Alex_Patino_17112 years ago
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    You can look up the DREYSE needle gun it was the first Breech Loading Bolt Action Rifle invented in 1836 by German Gun Smith Johan Nikolaus Von Dreyse The cartridge used with this rifle consisted of the paper case, the bullet, the percussion cap and the black powder charge. The 15.4 mm (0.61 in) bullet was shaped like an acorn, with the broader end forming a point, and the primer attached to its base. That could be the next leap in weapons technology in this book. I can't hardly wait.

  • Alex_Patino_1711
    Alex_Patino_17112 years ago
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    On paper: Socialism sounds like it could work, BUT here's the real kicker why it's doomed to fail, "HUMANS ARE SELFISH" it's a trait of survival ro have more then tour neighbors, wanting more power and authority, wanting more material things or wealth, wanting more women and most beautiful, that's how men have created great or not so great societies. if you can breed out selfishness out of humans then maybe can socialism work, until then it's doomed to fail.

  • Alex_Patino_1711
    Alex_Patino_17113 years ago
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    this is going to be sweet 😋