Becoming the nanny of a hot-tempered, stubborn as a ram who believes in his own rightness, sticking his nose in everywhere... God forbid this is even worse, constantly wiping his ass - what's the difference between becoming Harry's dog or Harry becoming a minion (I don't see any advantages of getting closer with him, except for constant problems) (plus, he also drags his family into this business as if he were stirring shit with a stick)

😂😂😂

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I already read this somewhere🤔

After reading a couple of chapters I gave up. I had a lot of questions and not finding answers, I lost the logic for this work. 1. MC is a bibliophile about villainesses (I doubt that a normal guy would get hung up on reading novels on this topic and remembering the plot of heroes and villains and their names) 2. MC has emotionally truly turned into a girl or he was previously a sissy (there are fewer such guys than transvestites). 3. The paranoia of the main character is not explained (being a villain, that is, a person in power, why would she show the traits of a weak character (this trait is usually shown by targets of bullying and the like). It is described here that the MC moved in and bent everyone over, then where did this paranoia come from?). 4. Manipulators show extremely pronounced emotional intelligence, and MC only shows autism syndrome (she found out that she was betrayed, but she remained silent and went to cry in her pillow. When a suspicious person came into the room at night, she asks stupid questions... MC knows that she was betrayed but she didn’t even prepare herself properly (like a knife under the pillow or something like that) 5. This is already his second life and he knows that she is a villain in the novel and he has not begun to learn fighting techniques (especially since she turned he had to learn self-defense as a girl. He should know that some guy can pierce her ass, which means that self-defense technique is one of the most important points for genders.) 6. I don’t understand why MC was designated a villain, if only she is in the past verse was her (in the new world she is an outsider). 7. It seems like this is a Xianxia world, but everyone has a Western name. 8. Where did the money come from for her to pay for the coachman and the hotel. 9. How does she know the history, geography, and technology of this world ? (how did she know that all equipment works on seals? Maybe she read a reference book somewhere or here every passerby is told the principle of what, where and how each item works) 10. A seal is mentioned every third word (the world of cultivation is fixated on collecting external energy inside the body this main goal. Sealers are like an alchemist, blacksmith or array caster - this is a secondary profession for improvement, rapid improvement and plus for earning money to buy resources such as herbs, pills and the like to achieve the main goal (Improving the skills of the main profession - cultivator).Obsession with seals as if it overlaps the main goal, that is, it stands on the first bar and not on the second). 11. Cultivation techniques and the like are not mentioned at all (it seems like there are inheritances, but the MC seems to have received a couple of abilities and recharging. There is no mention of techniques for rapid improvement with its unique features, or techniques for combat or fast walking or mental hardening). She was only given a cheat sheet for exam papers (after reading it, she learned how to cultivate... they write about channels, meridians, acupuncture points and the like... WTF... Even if this is a basic cultivation technique and it is widespread and everyone uses it (Why then sects when you can buy it and practice it yourself) 12. The cultivator realms (that is, ranks or levels for understanding the world) are not mentioned 13. After receiving the inheritance, she received the ability to suck out the emotions of those around her - how does it work? Who did she suck out emotions like a robot? (at this point I was already mentally tired. It’s like an energy vampire - literally, she sucked out my emotions through the phone). [Google tr]

It’s already starting to get boring that he always portrays himself as the extreme (victim), every time. And the images of forced relationships are already infuriating (MC has an emo complex or Sasuke that he is so autistic and everyone owes him “socks”). It seems that he has great ambitions to “reach the borders of magic” or something like that (I don’t remember), supposedly this is our long-term goal (but we understand that the true goal is to get under the skirt of as many natives as possible). And also, playing in the sand with Dumby and Voldy is already boring when you can play all over the playground (I mean, send them to Dumbledore and Voldemort’s bathhouse. Let them arrange their own “Dutch helm”, and you go to the “Maldives" or at least to Thailand to become a catgender). I mean that you can do anything (the main thing is the worldview of the magical world of Harry Potter and not the plot about “the boy who was given a banana”), you can even put a “green hat” on Dumbledore’s head by picking up Grindelwald (why get involved in the racist party (black- white wizards) "Dumbledore x Voldemort"). Show them a "galaxy far, far away" (go beyond the plot). [Google transmigrated]

It’s already starting to get boring that he always portrays himself as the extreme (victim), every time. And the images of forced relationships are already infuriating (MC has an emo complex or Sasuke that he is so autistic and everyone owes him “socks”). It seems that he has great ambitions to “reach the borders of magic” or something like that (I don’t remember), supposedly this is our long-term goal (but we understand that the true goal is to get under the skirt of as many natives as possible). And also, playing in the sand with Dumby and Voldy is already boring when you can play all over the playground (I mean, send them to Dumbledore and Voldemort’s bathhouse. Let them arrange their own “Dutch helm”, and you go to the “Maldives" or at least to Thailand to become a catgender). I mean that you can do anything (the main thing is the worldview of the magical world of Harry Potter and not the plot about “the boy who was given a banana”), you can even put a “green hat” on Dumbledore’s head by picking up Grindelwald (why get involved in the racist party (black- white wizards) "Dumbledore x Voldemort"). Show them a "galaxy far, far away..." (go beyond the plot). [ Google transmigrated]

God what a mess? Only a real man knows the value of pure male friendship

Wow, what's the controversy? Maybe for an alliance? or for the horde? Let's then no romance, purely male friendship (gachi-muchi) and everyone is happy.😂

MC вроде вроде из современного мира и ещё он отаку, он должен знать седьмое, восьмое и девятое искусство (он должен быть на волне современной культуры, а не древним китайским аборигеном). Можешь называть секту "лестница бога" или "палец вверх", ради бога можно даже "амбрелла" "арасака" или "рассвет" из наруто, можно даже "робота алкаголика" или "Гитлера в Голливуде". "Дракон Феникс" ("KFC и kingii"), "xiaobai" ("xiao dick/cock"). Прости чувак у меня бомануло. Я пришёл читать фанфики потому что устал читать про "молодых мастеров", "кричащих имён", "повседневных пощечин", "MC страдающим Сдвг".

No. I think that because of the territory and influence, if we were counting on strength, then there are many characters with yonko strength (golden lion shiki, douglas bullet, baron redfield, railey, mihawk, etc.) (railey and mihawk are just for example, shiki merged into plot).

The story becomes boring, the MC has become some kind of show off or such a general atmosphere ("look how good I am" ). there is not enough depth

Why can't he just be an ordinary squib? In the entire franchise, he is almost the only squib, he was the personification and example of this term. If he wasn't, then the meaning of a squib would be no different from a muggle, and there would be no place to be. His image was made in order to deepen the world of history.

But a cop? Seriously? Even the pizza delivery guy is more interesting. I think most of the readers died a heroic death (daring poison tasters) at this point. As I.

Why give a choice (we are not limited by good and evil; the world is not divided into black and white, it is as gray as our everyday life), this is a stupid question.

At worst, you can even "Homer Simpson" or "Peter Griffin." MC traverser. he should be on the wave of the "culture" of modernity, and not the ancient Chinese native.

Why is everyone's pseudonyms always "powerful", you can also give the norm a name or a meme name (for example, "a pinch of salt").