I feel very bad for Shura; she was used as a pawn to save the princess & Annara most definitely did not lay down all the facts, she could have told her the major fact; EMERY IS NOT AWARE HE HAS A DAUGHTER!!
I love what you did with the translations and correct grammar but you removed some chapters from the book and that's kind of unfair, now I have to go back to rereading the entire thing for missed chapters.
How is it fair that Emperor can make a decree to take a kid from her family, forget the fact that I hate the snake clan and all; this is just plain abuse of power & nothing else.
I hate the Snake Faction with a great passion, i honestly hope Emery causes them a great deal of pain and trouble when he finally uncovers his daughter's identity.