Mitchel_S

Really needs a proofreader very poor mistakes in pretty much every chapter, no real control over power and logic of the MC. Initial setting seemed interesting but its very hard to read.

Story starts off good, sadly the author lost grip on the power scale and pressed the classic make the main power of a protagonist a nerf button and then makes some weird excuses about it to people that comment about it. Overal quality is good besides some minor grammar and spelling mistakes.