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I just burst out laughing reading this, oh ignorance really is bliss
Good story, not worth paying for every chapter. If there was an option to just spend like 5-10 bucks and unlock all current chapters then I’d keep reading, but I’m too impatient to wait for one free chapter a day and I’m not spending over 20$ on around 100 chapters. I’d probably spend 20$ on unlocking all current and future chapters but that’s not really an option.
Considering the fact that midoriya was systematically bullied, beaten, and discouraged from the age of four I’m surprised he even managed to hold onto his dream of becoming a hero. Imagine ten years of being constantly told that you’re worthless and that your dreams can’t be accomplished. Now imagine a child going through that. The vast majority of suicides from bullying happen to those who are both older than him and have been bullied for a shorter amount of time as well, I think he shows plenty of mental strength from that alone. The fact that it was done from someone he considers his best friend is even worse…
I feel like the author is going a bit too hard on midoriya, he’s a child who’ been systematically beaten, bullied, burned, and discouraged by everyone around him except his mom since he was four years old. Expecting him to actually do things like working out to improve himself is naive considering that while he has hope he can be a hero he never actually believed it to be possible, in fact he was constantly told it was impossible.
Sorry if my comment seemed to be complaining, I didn’t really mean it that way but I’m not exactly an English major and writing feelings properly is an incredibly difficult thing for me. I appreciate your stories and realize that if I wrote stories they’d be nowhere near as good.
I think the whole custom or ancient wand trope is overdone in hp fanfics, usually unless it’s something important to the actual story it just seems out of place and dramatic to me. Like the whole one of a kind miracle bird that sheds only one feather is just odd and unless it suddenly resurrects it doesn’t matter to the story. I would more expect something like a piece of lethifold to tie into the aspects of the soul that’s already prevalent in the story.
Looked pretty good until dialogue started and then it got to a point that I lost all interest, beyond the fact that she immediately claims to be a corrupted heroic spirit, which not only doesn’t exist in this universe but she tells a group of TEEN heroes that she’s corrupted after almost killing someone and expects that talks don’t go south…
Paizuri should probably get some points as well
I think both dawnguard and Dragonborn will be great to do, dawnguard because learning from a millennia old necromancer dragon is bound to be fruitful, and dragonborn mainly for the shouts and ahzidal. if he can mind control ahzidal through necromancy or something he could grow a massive amount.