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_Volha_2mthReplied to kefranflor+1
"ā¦ Crown Prince Zeleskiazā¦"- _Volha_4mthReplied to Byul_Byre
In one of the first chatpers it's said the main character is 31. And the alphas are supposed to be a year or two younger. And you say it's justified for an Alpha (that is supposed to be physically strong, though and mighty by definition otherwise what's the point of being an alpha) gets a mild head injury and instantly gets your typical soap opera type amnesia. The type of amnesia that really only happens in the soap operas for the sake of plot twist, when a person looses years of memories and somehow magically retains all their cognitive faculties and no other brain or cognitive dysfunctions whatsoever. Very lame and clichƩ. Just take the constructive criticism and don't do the same in your other stories if they happen.
Ch 114 He doesn't remember me - _Volha_4mthCommented
Really? Second amnesia in 100 small chapters? It was already quite talentless with all those 30-year-olds behaving like moody teenagers, chapers repeating parts of the previous ones, now another amnesia just for the sake of having pretty much finished story going. Nah, dropping this, not worth the time at all.
Ch 114 He doesn't remember me - _Volha_6mthCommentedCh 258 Chapter -258
- _Volha_7mthCommented
What a beautiful confession! He should have said it when she was awake.
"I wouldn't ask you anything. Even if my people go against you, I'll go against them. It shouldn't only be here. We can go anywhere you want to go; I'll take you there. So please, come to me if you ever need to find a home. I'll be your home, waiting until the very end." - _Volha_1yrPosted
Why are most of the Chinese writers so obsessed with luxury, money and prices? They describe each and every thing with price and put really ridiculous numbers on the price tags. Am I the only one annoyed by this? When I open a new novel, I want stories, feelings, complicated characters, their adventures, development and struggles. I don't want endless shopping with unreasonable price tags, cardboard characters only occupied with bragging about money and luxury items and judging each other's worth by the fullness of their purses. I'm dropping this story.
- _Volha_1yrCommented
Why is the author so obsessed with money, brands and prices?
The meal cost 700 yuan, so it was a little luxurious indeed. - _Volha_1yrCommented
IMHO, that's just rude to speak this way to someone who haven't done anything bad to you and who seem to be the only one to offer help in such situation with no conditions. Even the ML had conditions.
"That's none of your business. Plus, I don't think we're close enough to discuss such personal matters. Please stop calling me in the future, I'm a busy person." Then, Huo Mian immediately hung up the phone. - _Volha_1yrCommented
At this point the realism has long left the chat, so I shouldn't be surprised that a surgeon is going to the operation room right after touching some documents/papers and not sterilizing the hand afterwards, right? Who cares if printing ink and germs get on someone's open brain, right? not a big deal at all.
"Let's go." With that, Qin Chu led the way into the operating room next door. - _Volha_1yrCommented
In this game even the pieces move the way they are supposed to. If the Medusa had a fight with the European bishop, it ment they were walking the same color of tiles, and that makes the fight with Mo Fan impossible if they played by the real chess rules. Bishops of different walking tile colors can never meat on the same tile of the board.
"Lord of Darkness, do you think I'm no match for him? Did you forget I've already killed a bishop, causing my strength to grow by fifty percent? Besides, his strength is reduced thirty percent too," The Crimson Scorpion Medusa was able to speak in a human language. Her face was like a human's, but around five times bigger. - _Volha_1yrCommented
Another broken chess rule, the bishops of the same side can never cross the same tole, just because one only walks on black tiles, and the other on white tiles only. If the European was a black tile walking bishop, he died on the black tile, and Mo Fan could never possibly step on that tile as he can only step on white ones.
The tile was empty. There were only the remains of several pieces that had fought there, including the European man who had been a bishop.Ā - _Volha_2yrCommented
Like absorbing Mo Fan won't and his power won't make the monster much stronger as well.
"You're not baiting it, you will actually let it absorb you! Our minds are connected, so once you are absorbed, I'll be inserted into the Black-Silver Armored Rock Demon's body like a computer chip, too! It's fine if you fall unconscious, I'll take control and crush its mind!" Apas promised. - _Volha_2yrReplied to ArchAngel_Michael
I guess he didn't count the demon element, it's said 5 element, and the demon one is the 6th
Mo Fan's cultivation was at least an entire street ahead of Mu Bai's back in high school, yet the goddamned bottleneck of the Advanced Level had allowed Mu Bai to take the lead. He could not deny Mu Bai's fortuitous discovery and diligence, but seriously, all five of his Elements had already reached their peak!Ā - _Volha_2yrCommented
Kilometer? Wasn't it said it was a tiny chamber?
Normally, only a Super Spell had the chance of killing a Commander-level creature in the Advancing Period with a single blow. Mo Fan's Lightning Magic was clearly very close to the strength of a Super Spell. They could still sense its destructive energy a kilometer away from the impact!Ā - _Volha_2yrCommented
I bet they don't have electricity in the pyramid, so the batteries of all electronic devices should be dead in few days. Mechanical watches are rarely used nowadays and they usually don't have calendar, only clock face with arrows.
(Editor's Note: There's this recent invention called a Watch that would work here...) - _Volha_2yrCommented
How could they find out such things about the guy's inner world and its structure from a burnt corpse? Isn't it supposed to be gone after death?
However, according to Feng Zhoulong, Bei Jiang's Shadow Element and Chaos Element had merged into one, since they shared the same Star Dust. It was against the principles of scienā¦ the principles of magic, or at least the basic principles that every student was taught over nine years of school. Those rules clearly stated that every Element could only have one Star Dust. It was an unamendable rule of magic! - _Volha_2yrCommented
Is he stupid? How is anyone supposed to talk while being kept by the throat? You are literally prevent him from taking and yet still somehow expect to hear answers?
"Lin Feili, I will give you one more chance. Where is the Earth Pistil!?" Tong Li tightened his grip on Lin Feili's throat. His eyes were almost poking out of the sockets, filled with greed and anger. - _Volha_2yrCommented
Don't try to imagine this š¤®
Hayla's claw was covered in black blood and rotten flesh. It felt like it had just pulled its organs out. - _Volha_2yrCommented
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Hayla let out a cry of pain. It reached its claw inside its chest and dragged a chunk of its flesh and bones that Mo Fan was hiding between out! - _Volha_2yrCommented
Didn't she say +50% to the fire power? Why is it +100% now?
Asha'ruiya's Blessing came fairly quickly. The burning sword that was around ten meters long suddenly grew to a length of twenty meters, and its flames were even fiercer!