Rihana_hinds
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Rihana_hinds5mthReplied to Limah_LisahCh 36 Deadline is in two days- Rihana_hinds6mthReplied to Bhenjeo_TumambacCh 30 Dr Joseph past with Demar
- Rihana_hinds6mthReplied to nanoreeCh 29 Losing control
- Rihana_hinds6mthReplied to JT_wawaCh 28 Doesn't match
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Zora has an older step-sister that always pretended that she cared for Zora, but truly she would do anything in her power to ensure Zora was never better than her. - Rihana_hinds6mthCommentedCh 26 Make a choice
- Rihana_hinds6mthReplied to Bhenjeo_TumambacCh 23 Wedding: Blood, guns and deaths part I
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What can I say馃槀 I guess my mafia is a bit decent. . .馃槒
"Damn, I can't believe that was my first time..." he said with a smirk on his face. - Rihana_hinds1yrReplied to TofSpades
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I think everyone should 馃槀
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Thanks! Not so good with tell sea live stories 馃槄
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I understand now!
Iris walked to Oris who stood on the roof of the house. Her Italian sky blue hair with black edges was down. She was beautiful and sweet, evil like her father and mother although she has a little bit of good in her. She dislikes Phoebe although Phoebe has never done anything wrong. She was born nine months after Phoebe and when she grew up she expected her father to give her all the love and care he could give because she's his last child but no he cares more about her. He says she is grown up and she knew what the world looked like. - Rihana_hinds1yrReplied to Limah_LisahCh 16 Don't want to see you again!
- Rihana_hinds1yrCommentedCh 2 Chapter Two
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Author check this please again. Try splitting the paragraph. Put a comma where you have "but" and the last sentence is where you telling about her father I think you made an error there.
Iris walked to Oris who stood on the roof of the house. Her Italian sky blue hair with black edges was down. She was beautiful and sweet, evil like her father and mother although she has a little bit of good in her. She dislikes Phoebe although Phoebe has never done anything wrong. She was born nine months after Phoebe and when she grew up she expected her father to give her all the love and care he could give because she's his last child but no he cares more about her. He says she is grown up and she knew what the world looked like. - Rihana_hinds1yrReplied to Xia_MiraCh 15 The chase
