Quietkaren

Thee deals in threes

This is by far my favorite asoiaf ff. I have tried to find something with fire based powers before and this is the only one and it is executed perfectly.

You could easily make a branch story where Harry never leaves the other timeline and do a whole Targaryen story dude

Badass

This story is one of the best so far very cool start and I am very interested to see how he shakes stuff up please don’t drop

Eternal sadness has befallen me due to your action with this chapter author.

You have to be trying to end up malnourished in the US the only people that are malnourished are drug adicts and abused children there are so many ways to obtain food very easily and even free if you get food stamps which is unbelievably easy to do.

Short*

Your inability to not have a cliff hanger is your largest shirt coming as a writer your story has little to no flow at all because you end every chapter at the climax

More clean and fluid lore here than on actual destiny phenomenal writing